1DELICIOUS TORTURE RE-WRITE
original posted: Tue, June, 1, 2010
original reposted: Wed, May, 25, 2011
DTR-W posted: Wed, May, 25, 2011
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She was stuck in a deserted school, with a self obsessed, over dramatic, cocky little fucker. Though she could openly admit he was hot, but aren't all popular guys? Being hot didn't stop him from being creepy. He hadn't stopped staring at her since they found out they were trapped inside. And it wasn't the 'oh God, out of all the people to get locked in with. I get you.' It was the 'I wanna do you so bad' look. Or in other words the 'come at me sexy' look with a sexy smirk companied by a wink.
We had given up our search of an unlocked door or window. She kept pacing or at least did until he grabbed her hips and yanked her down onto his lap only slightly roughly. before she could register what was happening was looked at her position and saw she was straddling his lap. She glared and began to struggle against his grip. It didn't work out.
"so..." be began, his confidence seeming to be a laugh with how nervous he looked.
"What?" she yelled, irritation clear in her voice.
"I want to make out" he replied in his usual blunt voice.
"yeah..." she replied in confusion. "What does that have to do with me-OH. Not happening. Keep your dick in your pants."
He gave her a sexy smirk.
"I never mentioned 'releasing' my dick as you so finely put it. But since you mentioned it...i could. I know you'd like me to. Baby don't worry, I'm all yours till we're let out "
He grind their bodies together and she attempted to jump off him. He held her down.
She was a virgin, like they say 'physically a virgin, mentally a whore' she was a virgin but even if she wasn't she wouldn't spread her legs for every jackass that walked past.
"Babe, we both know you want to" he whispered seductively, his breath blowing in her ear making her shiver slightly.
Oh the fun that shall ensue.
She struggled yet again, for a long moment before stopping. She looked at him only to see he eyes focused on her breasts. Trying to control the overwhelming contempt she grabbed his hair and pulled at it making his head rise up and make him come face to face with hers. It didn't take her long before she had him moaning.
Mental note: weak spots: under his ear, the corner of his mouth and a spot I just don't want to reveal
She continued to kiss, suck and lick at his weak spots. Changing from one to another until he pushed her back roughly making her lay back with him on top of her.
Paybacks a bitch and so are you. He grinned at her before continuing.
He's using my own trick against me. I know just what to do...
She wrapped her her legs around his waist tightly making him moan out her name.
He looked down at her, a dazed look in his eye.
She wrapped her arms around his neck and dragged his head down so till his lips met hers, and just as they were about to touch she remembered who he was. The moronic fuck who she was locked in with.
A/N with each of the original chapters being reposted a re-write will be posted that same day. I only wrote DT the original to chapter either 5/6 or 7. This re-write goes till i deem it finished. Please review.