I published the first chapter to the rewritten Boys and Detentions.
As for this...I don't know.
It's rushed.
It has awful grammar.
It's condescending.
It has no direction.
It has no backstory.
YEAH! It's funny, and I wrote this story when I received a detention for no deliberate reason. I was fucking pissed. And then it took this turn. And then I continued to rant about my shitty life through this story. I can keep this up and make it a CRACK story, but I don't have any room for this to develop as a story. It seems dead.
I do have other stories that I plan on posting up, only because I had inspiration for those. Those had room to grow, this just simply does not. I really tried, guys. I rewrote it so many times (for this original version) but they were all so bad. I want to improve with my writing, not digress. I'm sorry to disappoint, but I hope you can at least appreciate this story through the rewrite. IT WILL have most of these scenes, but they will be written without the cringe-y flirting (I was like 12 or 13 when I wrote most of them).
For my other stories, they are EXO and BTS fanfiction. Mostly EXO.
If you do not know what EXO is, you are seriously missing out.
Look up EXO - Monster right now, and whether you like it or not, read my fics. I'm also considering just changing the characters for my fictionpress version so more of you guys can enjoy it, but that's up to you. They're really good, SOOOOO MUCH BETTER THAN THIS TRASH, and they have a better voice.
I always write about a strong, funny, and angry female main character in a romantic comedy of sorts. Let me know.
Once again, I'm sorry for everything, but please give me a shot with these other stories.
I can keep them as fanfiction, or change them to original characters. Anything for you guys.
Love y'all.
~Nami
P.S BTW I graduated. I'm an ADULT. GOING TO COLLEGE.
GO TO MY PROFILE SO U CAN READ THE NEW VERSION
IT'LL BE MORE INTERESTING AND WILL HAVE MORE PLOT DEVELOPMENT FOR THOSE ROMANTIC SAPS