Hey guys,

I know several of you aren't really sticking with me through this story. But I do want to get it told and I want it out there. I've taken into account a lot of the feedback I've been getting and decided to revise the story a little more. So I've taken down the chapters that were previously up, and I'm going to spend some time editing them and putting on final touches.

That being said, you can read an updated version of the first chapter, while sticking around for the second one, which will be coming in a week or two.

I did change the plot (again) but I think this will be easier for me and for you guys to follow. I'm determined to finish this story!

Please give me any and all feedback you have, because I love to hear it as always.

- H