Author's note

Hi guys! So I'm sort of new to fiction press. I have a fanfiction account that I use a lot, but I decided to try this one too. I'm really liking it. I'm not used to creating my own characters so I need your help. How was the first chapter? Did things seem a little weird? I wanted to make a separate author's note than in the bottom of the chapter but I've noticed fictionpress does this awful thing where it pusblishes new stories like 8 hours later. So there's that. Thoughts?