Author's Plead for Reads, Reviews, and Favorites:
Hey, You there. Yes you, wonderful Fictionpress user. Please, Please, tell me anything about the story. That includes:
A.) That you like it/What you like about it
B.) That you hate it/What you hate about it
C.) Ideas on characters and plot
D.) Your favorite line, character, scene, ect.
E.) If you're able to beta it
Thanks,
Always-Under-New-Managment
P.S. This is just the introductory chapter, which means that there is the full summary, a snippit, and an update plan.
Full Summary:
Kenzi Lona is a normal girl. Hazel eyes, curly brown locks, nothing special on the outside. On the inside, however, she is very different. She has a rare mutation called the Eximius mutation. Her specific mutated gene is called sol latro, or sun robber. She is taken to a special research facility called Reform and taught how to use her mutation to its fullest. Along the way, she meets the rock-headed jerk butt, Derik Knight, the amazingly sweet Janice Kepp, and a few other crazy people. But, what is the whole purpose of a secret facility? Well, to everyone except the elite group called the Known, it is restricted information, and Kenzi is getting a bad feeling about them.
Excerpt from Chapter One:
"You, Kenzi Lona, are in an institution called Reform. We here take people who have certain… genes that make them able to do special things and help them to put those genes to use. The reason you are here is because you have been discovered to have a very rare gene called sol Latro. It's Latin for Sun Robber, and it gives you very amazing abilities involving Sun's UV rays and converting those into energy for your body."
"So basically, I can do photosynthesis? I'm part plant, but I can't do the cool stuff like make plants grow out of nowhere and stuff? Bogus." I said with a huff. Hey, if I was going crazy, might as well go along with it.
"A bit, except you might be able to do that. We have only ever seen one other gene anywhere near this one, it's called luna dantis, and he is able to take moon energy, not sun energy. It's very complicated and I'm sure you are very tired. The Emphasis surgery always drain patients. Come, I'll show you where Esmeralda set you up. I think you will like your room. It has a very good view and its own balcony, with access to the roof garden." He says.
Update Plan:
I'm going to do a review/reward type thing. Reviews required will be at the bottom of each chapter, but if they take to long (i.e. about 1 1/2 months) I'll update again.
Okay, that's all. Tell me what you think of the summary and general story idea. Crap? Good? Back to drawing board? Please!
Reviews required: Two. (We can manage that, right people?)