Um...R&R? Please? Anything (including flames) is welcome!

His eyes are raw
Holding unshed tears, motlen tears
Burning to their core
And his hands were stained
Cloaked in blood, hot blood
Dripping from the bodies of children
His voice was chilling
Edged with ice, bitter ice
Freezing the battlefeild
And his pain is real
Delivering death, desired death
Snatching innocent souls.