15Well I did. And I have realized that I have no poetic talent whatsoever. Out of ten or so
poems, I only liked one, so I revised it a bit and here it is now!
Happy Reading!
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The hoofs of the unicorn armada thundered on the ground,
As they tried to outrun the oncoming storm
It started to rain
Lightening flashed, racing across the sky
The thunder crashed,
Loud enough to scare the bravest of beasts
But the armada of unicorns kept galloping,
The storm drowning out their hoof beats
Faster and faster they went
Until they were but a blur
Finally, they reached the Dark Forest,
Where they would go back to their own world
When they reached the other side of the forest,
Where lay the entrance to their world,
They were greeted by their friends and family,
Who led them through the portal
Their legs buckled and they were forced to lie down
They were wet, dirty, and exhausted,
But they were happy because
They had beaten the evil that threatened their world
And made it home safely,
Knowing that in the morning, everything would be well…
Well? What did you think? How was it? Please review, no matter how bad it is. Flames
ARE accepted, but constructive criticism is way better. Remember. Good reviews
encourage me. And that's not necessarily a good thing!