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New Mystery/Thriller -- Chewing Glass
Devouring Daisies

"I let the flowers whisper to me as they arose from the carpet, they were so fragile, so exquite, so perfect. I bent down to hear them sing, but I got so close they floated away..."

I`m just trying to get some reviews on my new current obsession -- my story. I`ve been writing it for awhile now, and I`m hoping that this forum post will bring it some publicity so I can get some constructive criticism. I`m aspiring to being a published author eventually so any comment would help, even if your just saying "This sucks". But thanks for the time. Check it out; Chewing Glass.

8/16/2008 #1 Report
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