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6Beatitude Series »
Poems or prayers for the Beatitudes in Jesus' Sermon on the Mount in Matthew Five.
Poetry: Religion, K, English, Spiritual, chapters: 4, words: 613, favs: 2, updated: 7/14/2009 published: 11/27/2006
1Whorl
I recently saw a mini dust tornado in the streets. This poem is for summer.
Poetry: Nature, K, English, words: 66, 5/23/2006
1Dilution
You have drained me to the dregs.
Poetry: Life, K, English, words: 31, 2/1/2006
2Paperwhite
The cold as a direct result of our heater dying has been getting to me, hence this series of one and two line poems gathered here about winter. Enjoy. Reviews appreciated.
Poetry: Nature, K, English, words: 95, 1/23/2006
3Fire Cold Embers
Water kills fire, but cold winds just age it.
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 18, 1/23/2006
3Illusions
Humor. About how even the most simple things can obscure reality and that our eyes can fool us if we rely only on them. Please read and review. Critiques welcome.
Poetry: Life, K, English, Humor, words: 80, 12/8/2005
5Morning Tea Rituals
Morning tea ritual/one sugar, two sugars/cream . . .but in the end, even rituals weren't able to keep us together.
Poetry: Love, K, English, Angst & Tragedy, words: 66, 11/29/2005
5Silver Serving Spoon
Sorrow personified as a thief; Critiques welcome. Please read and let me know what you thought.
Poetry: Life, K, English, Supernatural, words: 51, 11/26/2005
3Canary Clock
Timid hands trace the shape of the universe on my back/delicate fingers find the sun and the moon.
Poetry: Love, K+, English, words: 72, favs: 1, 11/24/2005
3Paper Cranes
Sometimes you just don't have anything left to give. Comments and critiques are appreciated.
Poetry: Love, K+, English, words: 179, 11/22/2005
4Glass
Our words broke you, you never let us notice you were broken . . . Comments and critiques appreciated. Shaped poetry.
Poetry: Life, K, English, Angst & Tragedy, words: 98, favs: 3, 11/19/2005
5Blind
About evolution. Comments and critiques appreciated. One of my longer poems an in shape form. Read Manuel Fajar's excellent answering review in poetry form also.
Poetry: Nature, K, English, words: 164, 11/18/2005
3Drunk Moon on Needle Beach
Magnetic poetry that actually turned out fairly decent for once. It's different anyway. I'd appreciate any comments and critiques.
Poetry: Friendship, K, English, Angst & Drama, words: 29, 11/16/2005
3Ocean Wind
About a fisherman. Strangely enough. And there's also no mention of fish anywhere in the entire poem . . . Please read and review? Critiques are appreciated.
Poetry: Work, K, English, words: 91, 11/11/2005
4As I Walk
and somehow the calm/ deep waters here/reflect my soul much better/than any mirror at home. . .
Poetry: Nature, K, English, words: 55, 11/3/2005
1I Wanted to Understand God
. . .I wanted to understand God/ not that god which, created by human mind/ is as myself, in greatness surpassed only by power . . . Critiques welcome.
Poetry: Religion, K, English, Spiritual, words: 65, favs: 1, 11/1/2005
4Roses Bloom in Sunlight
-and you always said I was a rose./But roses bloom in sunlight- /so why do you hide me in your cave of memories? . . . please read and review. Critiques welcome.
Poetry: Love, K, English, Angst, words: 72, favs: 1, 10/30/2005
2Stones
Nobody is remembered for very long once they die. . . reviews and critiques welcome.
Poetry: General, K, English, Tragedy, words: 48, 10/23/2005
2Empty
I never see you. I never touch you. Are you really there? Critiques are welcome!
Poetry: Religion, K, English, Supernatural, words: 142, 10/22/2005