til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton My Stories 69
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Where I'm From
I am from CD Players not iPods and VHS not DVD's. Please R&R! I would appreciated it a lot! I always try to return the kindness!
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 337, 3/15/2007
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Fallen From Grace »
Summer of no regrets lost, a promise broken. It feels good to be back! : R&R mine and I will yours.
Poetry: General, K+, English, chapters: 2, words: 229, 3/15/2007
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Mistakes
Made my first mistake with youwanted to be your saviorR&R mine and I will yours.
Poetry: General, T, English, Tragedy, words: 222, 12/3/2006
11This is how
He comes active in Technicolor, cloaked in innocence and heartfelt words. R&R Please (cross between prose and poetry i guess)
Fiction: General, K+, English, Poetry, words: 232, favs: 1, follows: 1, 4/3/2006
8I Didn't Want This
"I had no interest in dark hair, dark eyes, soft skin, red lips, pessimism, and frustrated cries. I had..." Please R&R!
Fiction: General, K+, English, Angst, words: 271, 3/4/2006
13Tragedy
It is a form of poetry called Found Poetry. The subject is the tsunami that hit Asia. Please read and review and I'll return the favor.
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 92, 12/12/2005
10Recipe For Hate
It is as the title says, a recipe for hate. It is a form of poetry that you take a subject and turn it into a recipe. Review this and I'll return the favor.
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 134, favs: 1, 12/12/2005
11Missed Chances
"Only to awake and wish..." Something slightly short and wistful. R&R and I will returne the favor. I enjoy criticism.
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 95, 12/1/2005
8Masquerade
This is a two voice poem I wrote for one of my classes. "bright eyes, ready smile..." "Friendships broken and I'm too clingy." Please R&R!
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 177, 11/22/2005
5I am Hatred
This is a "What am I" poem. I wrote this for a class. I would appreciate any sort of criticism.
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 95, 11/20/2005
9Pretty Picture
"Polaroid pictures.../ripped to pieces/ruby red drips..." Please R&R! I appreciate and return all reviews. Advice and Criticism is welcome!
Poetry: Song, T, English, Angst, words: 162, 11/16/2005
7Shredded Memories
"...polaroid pictures scatter the floor, shattered images of my past..." R/R and I will R/R yours too!
Poetry: General, K+, English, Angst, words: 120, 11/2/2005
9Coming Out
It was something he had always suspected, maybe even acknowledged subconsciously... R&R and I will review something of yours
Fiction: General, K+, English, words: 231, 9/11/2005
6No More Longing
Black night, crimson moon...
Poetry: General, T, English, words: 30, 9/8/2005
6Foolish Mistake
A poem I wrote that had to have word inverse and rhyme for school. It turned out okay. It's about sneaking out. Hope you like. Review mine, I review yours after all it's the only polite thing to do.
Poetry: General, K+, English, words: 161, 3/21/2005
6Sweet Revenge
It's a Ballad. It's slightly morbid in it's hurmor. Tell me what you think!
Poetry: General, T, English, words: 301, favs: 1, 2/6/2005
8This is just to say
This is just to say. . . Hestantly I wrote your name today. . . (Please read and review! I will read something of yours in turn)
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 110, 1/4/2005
6Guilt
it twists, it turns. . . .
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 46, 11/7/2004
12So What!
Read and review and I'll read and review something of yours...better title tell me! ... Alex is a teen, a teen who's started an Gay Straight Alliance at his school... .
Fiction: General, K+, English, words: 301, 10/19/2004