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1lazuli
10 million sad songs can't be wrong: we're better off alone.Poetry: General, K+, English, words: 64, 9/9/2003
3dying january weeks
feedback DESPERATELY needed. i'm pretty sure i need to get rid of a number of these verses...help help help, it's very short and you'll get good karma if you critique! :}Poetry: General, K+, English, words: 92, 8/22/2003
3green tea
rating is for a use of a somewhat non-sesame street word. other than that, it's all good. this is actually a somewhat happy poem, but read deeper. then review. it is definitely in need of sprucing up, so any help with alterations is appreciated.Poetry: General, T, English, words: 129, favs: 1, 5/17/2003
2salt and water
rating is just because it could be construed as kinda sad. PLEASE read/review, i'm in desperate need of (hopefully constructive) criticism. i guess it's a love poem, it uses the word love, but rest assured that it does not rhyme and it is not happy. ; )Poetry: General, K+, English, words: 119, favs: 1, 5/17/2003
2note to self: buy more film
wrote it while feeling nostalgic one day. people who review get cookies. :}Poetry: General, K, English, words: 57, 3/16/2003
2taste of iron
"the noose looks like a necklace/when you look in the mirror..."Poetry: General, K, English, words: 77, 3/11/2003
4it slides past me every time
[loneliness is not the misery of being alone/ it is the fear that my situation will not change]Poetry: General, K, English, words: 214, 1/17/2003