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Winning a Rigged Race
Trying to work through some ambivalent thoughts on race and nationality, reviews welcome.
Poetry: Politics, T, English, Poetry & Family, words: 224, 5/24/2008
12 31 06
A new draft, first time i've been back on the site in a while. reviews most welcome.
Poetry: General, K+, English, words: 152, 5/6/2008
Egress
Based on part of a fairy tale I was working on. reviews welcome.
Poetry: Fantasy, K, English, Adventure & Fantasy, words: 104, 10/22/2006
2Kantan, or the Runaway
Not quite Haiku, but syllabic poetry. If fictionpress worked right, this would be in six stanzas each with a line of 3, 6, and 9 in a different order each time. reviews welcome.Poetry: Haiku, K, English, words: 86, 10/22/2006
1Obsolete Fantasia
Meditation on my own writing style. reviews welcome.Poetry: General, K, English, Poetry & Parody, words: 181, 10/22/2006
Sakura
Loose blank verse exercise. Critiques Welcome.
Poetry: Family, K, English, Poetry, words: 244, 10/22/2006
3A Sonnet on Sickness
What else to do when miserable and bored?Poetry: Humor, K, English, Humor, words: 116, 4/9/2006
2Aubade
Yet another Sonnet, this one in the style of an Aubade, or morning song.Poetry: Love, K, English, Romance, words: 117, favs: 1, 2/6/2006
3Last Wish
What I do instead of taking notes in Japanese Lit. I'm thinking of tweaking this further so reviews are oh so much more than welcome.Poetry: Family, K, English, Poetry, words: 115, 11/9/2005
3Blessed Herbicide
A Sonnet about how clear and easy an honest conversation can make a messy, unrequited situation.Poetry: Love, K, English, words: 117, 9/19/2005
4A Chance Meeting on the Train
A new short story I wrote. I would really appreciate any criticism anyone has.Fiction: General, K+, English, Romance, words: 807, favs: 2, 8/31/2005
2May the Good Lord Bless and Keep you
A story I wrote while thinking about religion and how any one part of ritual is really exchangable for another. I'd really like to know what people think as I'm trying to revise/polish it.Fiction: General, T, English, Humor, words: 802, favs: 1, 8/15/2005
2The Thistled Garden
A monologue for a woman between 17 and 30. I wrote it for my Creative Writing class and would welcome any feedback.Fiction: Play, T, English, Drama, words: 425, favs: 1, 4/15/2005
4Moments
A poem emulating e.e. cummings' "it is at moments when". It's a theme I've been working on, so reviews are most welcome.Poetry: Friendship, T, English, words: 118, 3/29/2005
1Bear
It's a working title, but the piece is nearing completion and i'd love to hear what anyone thinks. This is a short play that came out of some real, if surreal experiences.Fiction: Play, K, English, Drama, words: 1k+, 2/10/2005
4Autumn is a Cumen in
Changing seasons scare me a bit sometimes, but eh, it's always for the best right?Poetry: Nature, K, English, words: 116, 8/24/2004
5Whirlwind
A monologue I wrote for theater artsFiction: Play, K+, English, Drama & Angst, words: 875, favs: 1, 6/17/2004
8Falling Asleep to a Spring Thunderstorm
We got some great thunderstorms today just when I laid down to take a nap. Please read and review!Poetry: Nature, K, English, words: 63, 6/15/2004
1Medusa »
A working title. Scenes 1 and 2 up. A mother and son, newly on their own try to deal with various surprises in their livesFiction: Play, K, English, Drama, chapters: 2, words: 4k+, updated: 6/11/2004 published: 5/29/2004
4Peeling Memories
Spring in Philadelphia, what else can i say?Poetry: Life, K, English, Poetry, words: 66, 5/10/2004
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