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I wrote this a ver long time ago, when i was much younger and much less experienced with everything including writing but here it is anywayPoetry: Love, T, English, Poetry & Romance, words: 95, 7/14/2008
Lines
hard to explain, guess its essentially about regret rather than the obvious subject matter, read and review...bout the only thing ive written in a long whilePoetry: Life, K, English, Angst, words: 156, 10/7/2007
1 Afraid to let it be
put simply its about tryin to love again and failing...r&r plz!Poetry: Love, K, English, Romance & Angst, words: 152, 10/2/2007
1Damsel
this poem was created out of frustration, its unfinished, i would appreciate any ideas on how to make it better, it just doesnt seem right to me. PLZ R&RPoetry: Life, K+, English, Poetry & Angst, words: 144, 10/2/2007
Too Early
just some musings on wanting to be a child again... i havent written ANYTHING in about 3 years so critisism is more than welcomePoetry: Life, K, English, Poetry, words: 144, 9/30/2007
2 Cold Metal
just read... probably me at my bestPoetry: Life, T, English, Poetry & Angst, words: 141, 5/13/2006
1You and I
not really what the tittle suggest, kind of personal, not about anyone in particular READ AND REVIEW IT PLEASEPoetry: Life, K, English, Angst & Poetry, words: 404, 11/20/2003
1Darkness holds no reply
A must read, poem of my life or this part at least,PLEASE READ IT, and if you READ IT review it to.( it doesnt take long to review) I love critisim but compliments are welcome to :)Poetry: Life, K, English, Angst & Poetry, words: 178, 10/5/2003
2What do you see?
What do you see?When I look at you, Do you see me? or all the pain 've been through... read and review plz. CRITCISM WELCOMEDPoetry: Love, K, English, Poetry & Angst, words: 158, 4/27/2003