My Stories 112
1Barricades
"Barricades/ they only stop the afraid..." this is something of a rap (winces) song...not my usual style, so feedback much appreciated.
Poetry: Song, T, English, words: 643, 1/13/2003
1Green Monster
jazzy bluesy song ... reviews appreciated
Poetry: Song, T, English, words: 254, favs: 1, 1/3/2003
2Trapped
"I'm walking through a world that I can't see/ I'm trapped inside a person who's not me/ I can no more breathe the air..." please r&r
Poetry: Song, K+, English, words: 320, 1/3/2003
3Empty Words
please r&r
Poetry: Song, T, English, words: 261, favs: 1, 1/3/2003
2So Easy
You're looking for approval/ But face social removal...
Poetry: Song, K+, English, words: 111, 12/31/2002
2Won't Accept
They won't take what we're giving them/ They Won't accept what we're living in
Poetry: Song, K+, English, words: 299, favs: 1, 12/30/2002
1Plastic
frustration w/ shallow people...r&r
Poetry: Song, K, English, words: 152, 12/15/2002
1I Need Me
reviews appreciated
Poetry: Song, K, English, words: 182, 12/15/2002
1New Levels
r&r please...
Poetry: Song, K, English, words: 164, 12/15/2002
3Cobwebs
When all the cobwebs get out of my head/I will raise from this lonely bed/.../But until that day/ It's Alone I stay...
Poetry: Song, K+, English, words: 304, 12/12/2002
1Birthday
r&r please
Poetry: Song, T, English, words: 303, 12/12/2002
2Return
sometimes the most important things are the ones you left behind
Poetry: Song, K, English, words: 176, 12/10/2002
1Fragments
this is a sort of optimistic song after a great relationship has ended...its recounting the good moments as well as a little lamentation
Poetry: Song, K+, English, words: 235, 12/7/2002
1Thought About It
trying to brush off your problems and just being happy even if its a false happiness..r&r please
Poetry: Song, K+, English, words: 185, 12/7/2002
3Chasing Skirt
how sex (or lack thereof) can change a relationship...please r& r
Poetry: Song, T, English, words: 139, 9/26/2002
Vulture
wow...i cant summarize this. its so emotional and i really mean it...i guess its about the expectations of society which some people just cant meet, and the lengths they go to to try to be something that they just arent...just read & review it please
Poetry: Song, M, English, words: 197, 9/14/2002
1R U Happy?
another fantastically morbid song...enjoy
Poetry: Song, M, English, words: 144, 9/8/2002
Broken Words
this girl realizes she was fooling herself...r&r is appreciated
Poetry: Song, T, English, words: 480, 9/3/2002