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15Race Track »
Two pieces with racetrack metaphors.. maybe more to come...Poetry: Life, K+, English, chapters: 2, words: 155, 2/20/2007
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Are We Ok? »
Do you really want an answer?.. short r & r pleasePoetry: Love, K, English, Angst, chapters: 3, words: 138, favs: 5, 2/11/2007
12 Freedom
Honestly.. Im not sure what exactly this is about... its short and I like it.. so please review!Poetry: Life, T, English, Angst, words: 71, favs: 1, 2/6/2007
10 Happy
I want us to be happy, is it possible? Suggestions appreciatedPoetry: Love, K+, English, Angst, words: 66, follows: 1, 2/6/2007
10Natural Disaster
my indecision hurts our love like a natural disaster... longer than my recent pieces... sugestions appreciatedPoetry: Love, K+, English, Angst, words: 119, favs: 1, 2/1/2007
10Heartbreak 13007
Inspired by Manuel Fajar go check him out who told me not to wait for more heartbreak to write... unfortunately I cant seem to heed his advice... suggestions appreciated.. stupid inability to entitle two poems the same thingPoetry: Life, K+, English, Angst, words: 33, favs: 1, 1/30/2007
7Overrated Expectations
The title is really the first line of the poem... but I had a reader who told me it was illegal to curse in the title or summary so yea... love stinks... that's what this piece is about... not my best.. suggestions appreciatedPoetry: Love, T, English, Angst, words: 63, favs: 1, 1/30/2007
17Climbfall
Its not my best... but it is 2 am.. so.. maybe ill fix it up a little later.. any suggestions greatly appreciated.. basically its about climbing and falling in lovelifePoetry: Love, K+, English, Angst, words: 131, favs: 2, 12/18/2006
14Balloons
let problems float away... short not my best.. im not sure if its finishedPoetry: Life, K, English, words: 24, favs: 1, 12/1/2006
14 Mystery
A short piece... not my best... suggestions appreciatedPoetry: Love, K+, English, Angst, words: 30, 11/19/2006
14 Forever?
Based on the phrase I started things... he stopped them Not my best, but pretty good.. r & r pleasePoetry: Love, T, English, Angst, words: 57, follows: 1, 11/11/2006
10 Judging Eyes
It's from the point of view of an ex-armyman being judged by his son's new wife... short and definitely not my best... but I had to write a piece for Veterans Day that was not Antiwar or American and this was the best I could do... suggestions appreciatedPoetry: War, K+, English, words: 86, favs: 3, 11/11/2006
18 Your Mary
out wanting to help someone, but not able... not the Mary you'd think I'd be implying... read to find out who the Mary is and review while you're at it... a typo fixed thanks to HiddenLiesPoetry: Love, K+, English, Angst, words: 141, favs: 2, 10/22/2006
10 Healing Heart
About giving your heart away again even though its still healing... not my best.. suggestions appreciatedPoetry: Love, K+, English, words: 66, favs: 1, 10/21/2006
35Setting You Free »
again.. not sure if I like it.. about setting some one you love free.. r & r please!.. new chapter is the some concept... totally different more metaphorical piecePoetry: Love, K, English, chapters: 2, words: 306, favs: 3, updated: 10/19/2006 published: 11/10/2005
23 Wedgie
A funny poem about how it's hard to find sexy underwear that isn't a thong...Poetry: Humor, T, English, words: 54, follows: 1, 10/17/2006
10 Pure Love
Written in response to these questions... Can you fall in love with someone you have never met? With technology now, we are able to have friendships that exist online, can this develop into love? Definitely not my best.. suggestions appreciated!Poetry: Love, K, English, words: 94, favs: 1, follows: 1, 10/17/2006
18The Shift In Silences
silences in a phone convo... hard to explain.. not my best, but im just happy to actually be writing again & posting so r & r pleasePoetry: Love, K, English, Angst, words: 74, favs: 1, 9/30/2006
13All Or Nothing
Im either in or out of this relationship and its so hard to chose... not my best.. r & r pelasePoetry: Love, K+, English, Angst, words: 295, favs: 2, 9/29/2006