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180Unfinished »
Read the first chap.. its an A/N.. FEEL FREE TO STEAL ANY OF THIS (but give me credit)Poetry: General, K, English, chapters: 17, words: 405, favs: 9, follows: 1, updated: 9/22/2012 published: 2/3/2005
46Inspiration »
Originally an attempt for inspiration, not working so well, but I'll still be trying. I'm separating some chapters into their own story/poem if I think they're good enough. I'm keeping the blank chapter so I don't lose the reviews for future editing tips.Fiction: Biography, K+, English, Romance, chapters: 12, words: 1k+, favs: 2, updated: 8/16/2012 published: 2/6/2011
12I Don't Love You Anymore
Title explains it well enough. Short poem. Not my best. Constructive criticism greatly appreciated!Poetry: Love, K, English, Hurt/Comfort, words: 57, favs: 1, 5/29/2011
7Waited For You »
3 chapters from my inspiration collection all based on two lines I came up with. I may add more later. Constructive criticism as always welcomed!Fiction: Young Adult, K+, English, Angst & Romance, chapters: 3, words: 1k+, 4/3/2011
52A Goodbye »
NEW CHAPTER! Same couple, but different writing style. My first attempt at prose that isn't really poetic. Constructive criticism greatly appreciatedFiction: Young Adult, K, English, chapters: 2, words: 885, favs: 6, follows: 2, updated: 12/17/2010 published: 9/3/2009
29Burst
Short piece written about graduation. Not sure about how it came together... suggestions appreciated!Poetry: Life, K, English, words: 73, favs: 4, follows: 1, 5/7/2010
27Goosebumps
It's been awhile. Definitely not my best, but not my worst either. About realizing someone won't be coming back.Poetry: Love, K, English, Hurt/Comfort & Angst, words: 88, favs: 5, 2/22/2010
44Typical Her »
My first attempt at fiction outside of schoolwork . It's a short little thing. Please R&R!Fiction: General, K, English, chapters: 2, words: 557, favs: 6, follows: 2, updated: 8/10/2009 published: 7/28/2009
68Click
Something really random, but I actually like it. R&R please.Poetry: Life, K+, English, Hurt/Comfort, words: 72, favs: 11, 11/21/2008
53Recharge Me
Kinda a silly metaphor, but I'm so exhausted lately. Please R&R!Poetry: Life, K, English, Angst, words: 53, favs: 3, 10/6/2008
41
Pain
A shorty agnsty piece, read the a/n.Poetry: Life, K+, English, Angst, words: 72, favs: 2, 8/25/2008
61Extraordinary
He wants me to be extraordinary, but I can't. Constructive criticism is as always appreciated.Poetry: Love, K, English, words: 156, favs: 6, 7/19/2008
64Colored Love
Nothing in love is black and white. Short piece. Not sure if it's finished, but I'm not sure what else to write... lol. NJ Is My Home pointed out the tenses didn't match. I changed it to past tense, anyone think present would be better?Poetry: Love, T, English, Angst, words: 24, favs: 5, 6/11/2008
73Change of Heart
Title kinda says it all... relatively good... I think. Please critique away!Poetry: Love, K, English, Hurt/Comfort, words: 32, favs: 12, 4/9/2008
93Fire »
I'm playing with fire.. is it worth it? Updated version much better in my opinion... please let me know what you thinkPoetry: Love, K, English, chapters: 2, words: 63, favs: 7, updated: 3/27/2008 published: 6/20/2006
64Web
Beauty is deceiving. Again I like it, but I think it needs some work, so please help!Poetry: Life, K, English, words: 140, favs: 2, follows: 2, 3/11/2008
56Temperature Change
It's the finished version of one of my unfinished pieces... a haiku & a reverse haiku about love fadingPoetry: Haiku, K+, English, Romance & Hurt/Comfort, words: 30, favs: 8, 3/6/2008
46Maybes
A piece about losing someone and doubts I guess... I wrote it because I had to after a member of my family committed suicide... it's not my best so please critique awayPoetry: Life, T, English, Angst & Hurt/Comfort, words: 91, favs: 14, follows: 1, 3/3/2008
53Sadness »
title explains the poem... I redid the poem, but I left up the old version for comparison.. let me know what you think.. PLEASE if you only review one piece REVIEW the SECOND CHAPTERPoetry: Life, K+, English, chapters: 2, words: 126, favs: 6, follows: 1, updated: 2/28/2008 published: 6/13/2006
37My Prince?
Not my best, but I actually do like it.. I'd really love critiques on how to make it betterPoetry: Love, K, English, Hurt/Comfort, words: 201, favs: 11, follows: 2, 2/23/2008