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4 I Want to Be in a Band How do I summarise this poem? It's about life, music, and especially dreams. I can't really describe it without making it sound less simple than it really is. Please do read and review, I appreciate all feedback. :
Poetry: Life, K, English, Poetry, words: 420, 2/26/2007
1Lone Wanderer I was bored. I wrote. Don't blame me for the stupid content - blame Mr. Inspiration there. *points* Reviews & constructive criticism welcomed, flames will be eaten.
Poetry: Life, K, English, Angst, words: 100, 5/29/2003
4Let Me Live I was feeling down, and needed something to take my mind of things, so I looked out the window. The afternoon wind was really inspiring, and I came up with this. (Gosh, I sound like a freak.)
Poetry: Life, K, English, Angst & Drama, words: 90, 4/12/2003
Fantasize A really childish poem that I've thought of since ages - I just hadn't had the time to write it. It was supposed to be better, but I've forgotten most of the lines. So here's the 'revised' version.
Poetry: Fantasy, K, English, Angst & Fantasy, words: 75, 4/12/2003
3Que Sera Sera A piece of crap that took me weeks to finish. And it's surprisingly short, so don't say I didn't warn you. Please review and tell me how horribly stupid it is. I'll really appreciate that. - -*
Poetry: War, K, English, Drama & Angst, words: 275, 3/29/2003
4Drops of Silver A poem I thought of while in the car, at night. I find that car rides and bus rides inspire me a lot. That's when I usually come up with the strangest ideas... Anyway, review?
Poetry: Life, K, English, Drama & Angst, words: 312, 3/23/2003
3A Conversation Surprising, huh, that there's both humor and angst in one piece of work? If you're naive, just enjoy it for light reading. If you can look deeper, there's dry humour, mockery and too much sarcasm. It's supposed to be mocking Bush's declaration of war. Rev
Fiction: Humor, K, English, Humor & Angst, words: 367, favs: 1, 3/20/2003
2A Sapling's Story Another poem I thought of just a few days ago, while colouring. (Oo...colouring again.) I like the meaning behind this, although frankly I don't quite like the writing style I used for this. You might find it stupid or that it doesn't make any sense, but
Poetry: Life, K, English, Angst, words: 262, 3/20/2003
2The Oak Tree A descriptive poem I wrote while colouring a little doodle. It just came up in my mind out of nowhere. (Praise the Muses.) I think the ending seems a tad hanging, although I rather like it. o Tell me what you think though, just review. :)
Poetry: Nature, K, English, words: 281, 3/19/2003
1Cry Another poem. Yippee! - -; I put it under the category 'Life' because there's no category called 'Stereotypes'. Sheesh. FictionPress should add that in. Anyway, read and review, OK?
Poetry: Life, K, English, Drama & Angst, words: 290, 3/2/2003
5Imperfection Ignorance. Indifference. In...in... um, never mind. It's a pretty good poem, to me anyway, but don't read it if you've got anything against sarcasm. Okies? Okies.
Poetry: General, K, English, Drama & Angst, words: 242, favs: 2, 2/24/2003
6A Phone Call My diagnostic essay test. I got a pretty good score, although my English teacher was eager to point out numerous mistakes in my writing. Anyway, read it, and see if you agree with my teacher...
Fiction: General, K, English, Angst & Drama, words: 874, favs: 1, 2/8/2003
2Helen Keller A short poem that I originally wrote in Indonesian. I deeply admire Helen Keller, so I wrote this poem about her childhood tragedy. Your reviews will be greatly appreciated!
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 168, 1/10/2003
2Any Day Now Does not contain any a)sickness, b)religious issues or c)racism. It's completely healthy and suitable for all ages...and what's more, it's environmentally-friendly! What more could you ask for in a poem?
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 139, 12/24/2002
3The Dark Passageway Like all my other poems, it's a)weird, b)stupid and c)nonsense. You can read it if you want, and even review. But don't say I didn't warn you.
Poetry: General, K, English, Angst, words: 238, 12/24/2002
2Nothing Words Can Describe Just some verses of very...weird things I need to express. I seriously don't know what to name it, thus the title. Review anyway.
Poetry: General, K, English, Angst, words: 146, 12/24/2002
1A Summer's Day Throwing away your memories will not get rid of the pain within.
Fiction: General, K, English, Romance & Angst, words: 1k+, 12/24/2002
5Forever A poem I did a while back. Pretty weird and stupid, don't mind me... Rating is general, cos anybody can read it...no violence or, um, other things in it. Just a plain stupid poem.
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 153, favs: 1, 11/25/2002
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