wow. i don't think people have realized that i am never coming back to this site again. let me emphasize: i am never coming back to this site again. don't send me reviews with constructive criticism, please. i love the fact that people still read my stuff, but it's annoying when people tell you "oh you should do this because this isn't right blah blah blah" two years after you've finished writing something. no, i am never going to edit my past works because i hate them. save your time reviewing and go read some hawthorne or some wilde instead. kay thanks.