My Stories 23
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Cause of Sin
After finishing the Kite Runner, I wrote this little piece on evil.
Poetry: War, K, English, words: 52, 11/20/2007
Ladder to Success
Not exactly an essay, this is the valedictorian speech I wrote for English class. Hope you like it!
Fiction: Essay, K, English, words: 1k+, 11/9/2007
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The Night I Saw my Father Break
This is actually a true story about an incident that I witnessed a couple of years ago. It is a pretty emotional piece. Please read it and give me some REAL feedback, thanks.
Fiction: General, K, English, Tragedy, words: 552, 9/9/2007
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Last Call
About living with the effects of alcoholism, once again. Reead.
Poetry: General, K+, English, Angst, words: 217, 6/19/2007
Metal paper
The metal paper in this poem symbolizes the familiarities of writer's block. Read & review
Poetry: General, M, English, Poetry, words: 175, 6/26/2006
2To Go Down
Another one about drugs ... please read review!
Poetry: Life, T, English, Drama, words: 157, 2/24/2006
2911: EMERGENCY
People can die if they do not call for help. I wrote this after I called the police and had a woman arrested for DWI. Read & review please.
Poetry: General, T, English, Angst, words: 191, 12/12/2005
1Just don't
a rant poem associated with an alcoholic parent. it's good; read it.
Poetry: Family, T, English, Angst, words: 215, 8/29/2005
2Minor existance
Should the death of a poet be mourned, or merely celebrated? R & R
Poetry: General, K+, English, Poetry, words: 166, 8/21/2005
2Heart Sick Remedy
"Sing your tune, darling; but don't make it short or even sweet..." please r & R. rated for one swear word
Poetry: Love, T, English, words: 177, 5/22/2005
1Lifeless Cripple
"Crippled Corpse-thing come die with me. Our remains will rot in unison, and forgotten by the people that never loved us..." Yrah, read it please.
Poetry: General, K+, English, Angst, words: 302, 11/16/2004
8Betrayed
..by a best friend. backstabbed. r/r PLEASE!
Poetry: General, T, English, Angst, words: 102, 1/23/2004
5Untitled Remembrance Day Poem
i had to write this for school... i think it's pretty good... let me know what you think
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 98, 11/10/2003
6Numb
about a baby in its mothers womb... please read and let me know what you think. thanks
Poetry: General, K+, English, Tragedy, words: 141, 10/15/2003
5What Drinking Will Do
shitty title, i know. it's a fictional poem about a girl whose father came home drunk and got out of control. she wakes up in the... R/R plz
Poetry: General, K, English, Tragedy, words: 324, 10/7/2003
10Unspoken Pain
pretty much how silent speaks of a person's pain... r/r plz
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 82, 9/9/2003
2Masterpiece
Gather some paints/pastel colours if you please/use your imagination/go wild, feel free... PLEASE R/R
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 95, 9/3/2003
6My True colours
explaining how red, black and white relate to me and my life. plz r/r i'm proud of this one
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 179, favs: 1, 8/10/2003