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4Flirting with a pen and paper
Short poem about the way I feel about writing sometimes - rated for slightly suggestive language, but it's not obscene or anything - I would really appreciate feedback as this is one of the 1st poems I have written in a while now...Poetry: General, M, English, Poetry, words: 81, 5/22/2006
4Want
Ok, it has been ages since I have uploaded anything (been suffering from writer's block hehe) but this is just a little haiku I penned late last night - took me all of 2 minutes to come up with...Poetry: Haiku, T, English, Angst & Romance, words: 11, 5/22/2006
4Stoned Romeo
Rated for (not too graphic) sexual references and some mention of drug use. Im quite proud of this actually... it's alot different to previous poems i've written. please R&R!Poetry: Love, M, English, Romance, words: 454, favs: 1, 1/30/2005
6Innocent Tongues
Dedicated to the person who taught me how to love... and how to loose. All I can say is I truly hope heartbreak is the kinda thing that can only happen to someone once in a lifetime.Poetry: Love, K, English, Romance & Tragedy, words: 183, 11/9/2004
4Wild Card
I'm not quite sure what I think about this one, and I am even less sure how others will respond to it when reading it out of context - so I would appreciate your comments. Also this is my first attempt at getting an extended metaphor going.Poetry: Love, K, English, Romance, words: 172, 12/16/2003
3Old Wounds
Angst ridden poem about an ongoing problem in my life - I'm quite proud of it, so please R&R. (See my poem 'Forbidden Fruit' for background reading).Poetry: Love, K, English, Angst & Romance, words: 156, 11/23/2003
6Loss
This is about what it feels like to lose someone important to you.Poetry: Haiku, K, English, Tragedy, words: 15, 8/18/2003
5Dance
I came up with this in a matter of secconds - I quite like it, please R&R!Poetry: Haiku, K, English, words: 11, 7/4/2003
5Relief
This is the first time I have ever attempted a Haiku, so I would appreciate your comments. It's about an immense feeling of relief.Poetry: Haiku, K, English, words: 14, 7/4/2003
11Blood Lust
This one is kind of gritty, it's about a time when I used to cut myself. It has taken me a long time to realise it's not the answer. R&R please!Poetry: Life, M, English, Angst, words: 144, favs: 2, 6/4/2003
4Crimson Infatuation
This one is kind of hard to summarise, but I like it alot. Pleae R&R!Poetry: Love, T, English, Romance, words: 120, favs: 1, 6/3/2003
4Forbidden Fruit
What can I say? You can't help who you fall for. I would really like to hear other peoples take on this one, there is a fair bit of musical influence in it but I don't know if anyone will pick up on that aspect. (The rating is for swearing, once)Poetry: Love, T, English, Angst, words: 240, 5/18/2003
7Under The Moon
Some people just seem to have this effect on you, they can make you feel so strong and yet so weak at the same time. Anyway I like this so please R&R, I'd appreciate it!Poetry: Love, K, English, Romance, words: 132, 3/2/2003
4That Song
This poem doesn't really have much stucture or anthing, but that is probably because my thoughts are a bit fragmented when it comes to this person. This poem makes me cry!Poetry: Love, K, English, Romance, words: 130, 3/2/2003
2Tell me a Story
A poem about my love of reading. This is one of my favorites so please R&R.Poetry: General, K, English, words: 129, favs: 1, 3/2/2003
4TERROR
I wrote this poem when reflecting on the events of Sept 11th '01 at the time I was frightened and selfish, I was more concerned with my own safety than the people who were directly affected - I know better now.Poetry: War, K+, English, Angst & Tragedy, words: 100, 2/27/2003
7Teardrops Falling
This is my first attempt at writing poetry, so constructive criticism will be appreciated. Be gentle though!Poetry: Life, K, English, Angst, words: 76, 2/26/2003