3Take Another HitWatch Me Die My best friend of 6 years aren't friends right now because I finally stopped biting my tounge and confronted him about how hard it was to watch him get in his car high every weekend...this is the product of that, tell me watcha think...it's been a while s
Poetry: Friendship, T, English, Angst, words: 366, 4/13/2004
5An Ode to Gretchen Regret is all that I'm left with now that the opportunity to pour my heart out has passed me by with little more than a passing glace. Kind of morbid, very heart felt, worth an R&R.
Poetry: Friendship, K+, English, Angst, words: 256, favs: 1, 1/31/2004
5Nostalgic It's amazing how one person can devastate hundreds simply by moving away..."No, you weren't God, but you were/the closest thing some of us had" Just sort of a representation of how one person can touch so many lives and how now all we can do is reminisce.
Poetry: Friendship, T, English, Angst, words: 244, favs: 1, 1/25/2004
4My Daily Battle What do you do when your heart is telling you that he's right for you and your head is screaming not to dive in head first? This is the battle with which I'm faced on a daily basis...please take a minute to drop me a review, I'll make sure to check your w
Poetry: Life, K+, English, words: 197, 1/2/2004
5My Path Just because I don't walk your path/doesn't mean that I'm lost...kind of a weird metaphor for life and I was experimenting w/ new line breaks...tell me whatcha think and drop an R&R for me...rating for some strong language.
Poetry: Life, T, English, words: 333, 12/22/2003
2Gracious What do you do when the one person you love most walks out of your life without even thinking twice and all you yearn for it to have them back? Would you even take them back? The title is meant to be extremely sarcastic, please R&R if you get a chance.
Poetry: Love, K+, English, Angst, words: 179, 12/20/2003
3Upon Your Mantel All the other girls rest brilliantly upon his mantel, all high and mighty and I sit painfully within his closet...I dunno sort of a weird analogy but I'm testing it out...R&R pretty pretty please, I need some feedback.
Poetry: Love, K+, English, Angst, words: 230, 12/3/2003
3Crimson Defeat She attempts to reach and unresposive world, locked away in a sound proof room she waits for someone to find her. I'm experimenting w/ new line breaks and stuff, tell me whatcha think...R&R thanks much!
Poetry: Life, T, English, Angst & Drama, words: 148, 11/10/2003
3NumB I've finally reached a point where I just have to say goodbye to him, the pain is just too much. I've been in a really morbid mood lately so plan on seeing a lot of stuff w/in the next few days...R&R pretty please.
Poetry: Love, K+, English, Angst, words: 220, 11/10/2003
3Fire I know..boring title, but this it's not a boring piece at all. It's a poem I wrote for my creative writing class about the mass fires taking place in Cali. right now. R&R if you get a chance, I'd love feedback.
Poetry: Nature, K, English, words: 149, 10/28/2003
4Just Smile Last night was homecoming...I got something that I've yearned for for FOUR years, a slow dance w/ the guy all my love poetry is about. It was the most amazing thing ever and this is the product of that emotion. It's very lighthearted and definetely not my
Poetry: Love, K, English, Romance, words: 300, 10/12/2003
4Standing Before Me He didn't know I was watching...but I was and it's actually what got me cutting again, as crazy as that must sound. I wrote this a few months ago though, never got around to posting it, so it doesn't really apply anymore. R&R please!
Poetry: Love, K+, English, Angst, words: 267, 10/8/2003
4The Last Tear Why cry when you can laugh your worries away? I only cried one tear for him, never again will I cry in the name of love. Pretty proud of this one, give it an R&R if you're feelin generous and not looking for angst.
Poetry: Love, K+, English, words: 290, 10/8/2003
6A Token of Nothing Sometimes the laughter is just too loud, and the silence all too deafening...a very morbid poem about suicide. Please R&R, I'd really like some input.
Poetry: Life, T, English, Angst & Drama, words: 308, 10/8/2003
5He Never Knew One of my best friends moved away a few months ago and I've been having a really hard time coping because there's so much I should've said to him when I had the chance, now it's too late and my hapiness is once again lost. I'm really proud of it, R&R plea
Poetry: Love, T, English, Angst, words: 332, 9/24/2003
3So I Can Believe Do you ever want to control just one aspect of your life? One without any outside influence, lately I feel like I can't believe or act like I want to and its suffocating, this is my plea for freedom. R&R pretty pretty please.
Poetry: Life, K+, English, words: 160, 9/23/2003
3My Only Hope I seem to be just hitting brick wall after brick wall when it comes to love lately. yet, there's still that haunting tinge of hope that lingers in every thought I think. This is much different that my prior work, tell me what you think.
Poetry: Love, K+, English, words: 139, 9/23/2003
3Too Much to Ask I never realized that some things really are too much to ask for and far beyond mine or anyone else's control. I've been very fed up with relying on people lately only to end up hurt, I'm only second best to all the prissy-perfect girls out there. R&R
Poetry: Life, K+, English, Angst, words: 189, 9/23/2003
6Picture Perfect A fairly decent object poem I'm having to write for my creative writing class, it's due friday (9/12) and I'd REALLY like some feedback before then if at all possible, thanks.
Poetry: Love, K+, English, Angst, words: 177, 9/9/2003
5And I Will Cry How can I be so genuinely happy now and still cry myself to sleep every single night? It just doesn't seem right. It's a bit lengthy but definetely something worth a read and maybe some constructive critisism beacuse I know it could definetely use a bit o
Poetry: Life, K+, English, Angst, words: 659, favs: 1, 9/3/2003