3The Past Within the Present Sometimes you miss someone so much and yearn for them to a point where you start seeing them in other people around you, to a point where you can no longer seperate reality from a fantasy, and it's scary. This is a work in progress so please leave constru
Poetry: Love, K+, English, Angst, words: 260, 8/19/2003
3My One Weakness I can be strong or I can be ever so weak, which would make him happier? Just something I was thinking about late one night, when I realized "who am I being strong for" No one appreciated my strength and it only causes me pain, so why bother? R&R please!
Poetry: Love, K+, English, Angst, words: 330, 8/19/2003
5Your Little PingPong Ball Do you ever feel like people completely disregard the fact that you are a human and not an object to be played with? Well this conveys that emotion as well as a few others, please take a few minutes to read and review, I'd love the feedback.
Poetry: Love, K, English, Angst, words: 266, 8/9/2003
4Someone elses Shoes This is a very different poem about walking is everyone's shoes but your own and realizing yours aren't as bad as you thought they were after all. Please review, I'm not finished w/ this and would love the feedback.
Poetry: Life, K, English, words: 455, favs: 1, 8/4/2003
4Goodbye by any Other Name This poem just discusses how no matter how you say it, goobye is always going to be hard and painful. I'm pretty proud of this one so please take a few moments to read and review it.
Poetry: Life, K, English, Angst, words: 226, favs: 1, 8/3/2003
4Colder than Stone yes...I'm a hopeless romantic...I can't help it...n e ways, sometimes it hurts to watch someone just pass you by when on any other day they'd at least say hello. Reviews are greatly appreciated.
Poetry: Love, K+, English, Angst, words: 338, favs: 1, 7/29/2003
7Drifting Sometimes all you can do is watch as someone forgets about you, it's painful but sometimes it's the only options. The structure is a a little bit less organized than my norm. but I'm VERY proud of this one. Pretty please take a few minutes to read and rev
Poetry: Love, K+, English, Angst, words: 320, favs: 2, 7/28/2003
3Walking Away This isn't very well done structurally but it's packed with emotion so it's definetely worth a read. I used running through an airport, due to being late for a flight, as a metaphor for my relationship with my mom. R&R please.
Poetry: Family, K, English, words: 449, 7/28/2003
5The Darkness Sometimes the things we fear most can only be seen in complete darkness. Most of us avoid our darkest fears instead of confronting them and I'm no different. Reviews are always appreciated, I'd love the feedback.
Poetry: General, K, English, Angst, words: 377, 7/12/2003
7Childish this isn't my best work, it's a lot less figurative then my norm. but it conveys the feeling of standing infront of someone you love and feeling like a child again before you learned how to talk. Worth a read, reviews are always greatly appreciated.
Poetry: Love, K, English, words: 581, 7/12/2003
6My Little Angel This is about my baby (8 yrs.) sister and how I see so much of the hell I've been through starting to happen to her and how I wish there was something I could do. If you know me you know how much I despise my sister so this may be weird to read for you.Wo
Poetry: Family, K+, English, words: 391, favs: 1, 7/11/2003
4Carrying Your Hope This is sort of a sequel to "Carry My Hope" only from the other persons point of view, I thought it'd be fun to think from someone else's shoes, R/Rs would be greatly appreciated.
Poetry: Life, K, English, words: 313, favs: 1, 7/8/2003
4Carry My Hope Sometimes hope just becomes painful and overwhelming and you yearn for someone to just get rid of it for you. Kinda of odd way of thinking, R/R please.
Poetry: Life, K, English, words: 257, favs: 1, 7/8/2003
5Damaged It's rough watching the one you love, also your best friend, loving somebody else, because as a friend you are supposed to listen...even when it hurts. R&R please, I really would love the feedback.
Poetry: Love, K+, English, Angst, words: 328, 7/5/2003
6The Worst Teacher Ever This was not written by me it was actually written by one of my best friends and I found it so amusing that I wanted to see what everyone else thought. Please review, I'd really like all the feedback I can get. Thanks.
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 199, 7/3/2003
6Pressure of Mine We've all felt pressure but who puts the pressure upon us? this is about identifying the least suspected person, yourself. R&R Pretty Please, I'd love the feedback.
Poetry: Life, K, English, words: 436, 6/29/2003
5Welcome to my World This is one of my darkest pieces yet and I'm not exactly sure what inspired me to write it, I just sorta let my mind go and wrote up a storm. It is a tiny bit hard to follow but definetely worth and R&R.
Poetry: Life, K+, English, Angst, words: 403, favs: 1, 6/28/2003
10Please, Critisize Me There isn't really a way to sumarize this, it's a completely sarcastic poem written out of pure anger. you sorta just have to read it. Reviews are always a blessing.
Poetry: Life, K, English, words: 329, favs: 1, 6/26/2003
5Not Without a Fight Sometimes you have to fight to keep your friends close because you are the only one who feels the friendship drifting. Reviews are always appreciated.
Poetry: Friendship, K, English, words: 341, 6/25/2003
10Could You Cope? This poem is another one of my love-sick poems only with a more angry style and I think it's one of my best yet. worth a read and review.
Poetry: Love, K, English, Angst, words: 507, favs: 1, 6/25/2003