4Am I Invisible Yet? This poem depicts the confusion and frustration living in a household where there is no escape, just constant nagging. There is some profanity but nothing too out of the ordinary. This is probably my most passionate poem yet, R&R please.
Poetry: Life, T, English, words: 640, 6/25/2003
2Ever Erasing Smile This poem entails the yearning to see that special someone glace in your direction and the thought process that follows that need to see his tender smile. Reviews are always greatly appreciated and I'm not too sure about this poem so even more so here.
Poetry: Love, K, English, words: 280, 6/25/2003
10Digging Deeper This poem is about everything that lies beyond my outter appearance and how if people would just dig a little deeper they would discover so much about me. I've been all over the place with my writings lately so reviews are greatly appreciated.
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 477, 6/25/2003
5Making Waves This story conveys my frustration with a friend who has yet to learn that sometimes its ok to make waves in the ocean of life. (R&R please)
Poetry: Friendship, K, English, words: 452, 6/25/2003
2The Unspeakable This poem relays the pains of trying to express your feelings towards someone but not being able to articulate the words. R&R please, I'll make sure to check out your work
Poetry: Love, K, English, words: 686, 6/25/2003
1My Wild Child Lately I've felt very trapt and realized that what the world sees in me is not who I want to be or who I know that deep down I am and this discusses the struggle of knowing that I have a different side but cannot release it without help.
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 499, 6/25/2003
2The Weight of the World This poem is about living up to people's standards and things of that nature, I wouldn't have posted this but I knew a friend (ashley) would be able to relate as many of you probably can. Reviews are always appreciated.
Poetry: Life, K, English, words: 324, 6/25/2003
1Teenage Sob Story a fairly decent poem,not one of my best, but I think it captures the emotion of a fairly common teenage dilemma very well. (R&R and I'll make sure to check out some of your work)
Poetry: Love, K, English, words: 383, 6/25/2003
1I hate her This poem discusses my inner struggles with my mother, I warn you that there is some profanity due to the angry nature of the poem (hence the rating). (R&R, Pretty Please, I'll make sure to check some of your stuff out)
Poetry: Family, T, English, words: 517, 6/25/2003
1My Guardian Angels I never have been able to articulate the words to tell my friends how much they really mean to me so I figured I can express everything else through my poetry why not this? It's a very new style for me so reviews are always welcomes, even negative ones.
Poetry: Friendship, K, English, words: 682, 6/25/2003
My Daily Dose An over dramatization of what my day is like without the presence of the only person who seems to hold the ability to make me smile every single day. Take note that I did write this in the middle of a class and therefore it is not my best work.
Poetry: Love, K, English, words: 359, 6/25/2003
From Hopeless to Hoepful This poem entails the story of an unexpected friend that helped me to my feet when I felt completely lost and alone. (R&R Pretty Please)
Poetry: Friendship, K, English, words: 388, 6/25/2003
The Pains of Experience This poem discusses the transition from flat out hating life due to the loss of a loved one to realizing that I can learn from my pain instead of simply anguishing in it. R&R Please I'll be sure to check out your work
Poetry: Life, K, English, words: 475, 6/25/2003
1Silent Chaos This is a sort of abstract poem about sitting in a really quiet office all day and how annoying the silence gets and I dont know, I was really bored and lacking all inspiration, but I'm pretty proud of it, all things considered. I'd love a review.
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 639, 6/25/2003
1Crazy Confused This is about the frustration as a result of recieving mixed signals from a crush of four years. Reviews are a blessing.
Poetry: Love, K, English, words: 178, 6/25/2003
Your Confession This poem discusses the struggle a friend of mine and I under went when we noticed some changes for the worst in a close mutual friend of ours, it isn't my best work but it's worth reading. (R&R please, I'll make sure to check your work out)
Poetry: Friendship, K, English, words: 428, 6/25/2003
1Always Blamed I've fought an inner struggle with myself for a very long time, trying to figure out how I can hate a girl I don't even know. This poem is not all deep and emotional like my others but its worth a read and review.
Poetry: Friendship, K, English, words: 521, 6/25/2003
2A Single Second More I had a dream last night that I have been waiting to have for two years and this is just sort of my way of coping with having to wake up. It's not like most of my other poems so reviews would be greatly greatly appreciated.
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 536, 6/25/2003
2Waiting for Tommorrow This poem discusses the safe place that we all need to escape to once in awhile and how hard it is to stay there in my household. Pretty sucky summary but I dont know how else to describe it. R&R I'll make sure to check your work out.
Poetry: Life, K, English, words: 466, 6/25/2003
Guidance to my Heart Similar to some of my other poems, with a new outlook. Basically it just discusses my reaching out for the understanding of a crush of three years. R&R and I'll make sure to check your work out.
Poetry: Love, K, English, words: 758, 6/25/2003