6Guns Cry Too Please R/R...i'd really appreciate some constructive critizism
Poetry: Politics, T, English, Tragedy, words: 378, favs: 3, 9/23/2004
7Hold Rated for suicide references...Please R/R
Poetry: Love, T, English, Angst & Drama, words: 370, 6/21/2004
16More Than One Way To Cry Definitely my darkest poem yet. Please R/R
Poetry: Life, T, English, Angst & Poetry, words: 336, favs: 5, 5/20/2004
7Rainbow Basically it's about heartbreak and coming to grips with the fact that its time to end a relationship even though you may not want to because holding on to it is only hurting you...hope that made sense...anyway please R/R
Poetry: Love, K, English, words: 231, 4/26/2004
7Waiting to Explode Coming to the realization that it's over is the hardest part...please R/R!
Poetry: Love, K, English, Poetry & Angst, words: 199, 4/14/2004
10Crash This is my first haiku ever and I'd really appreciate some feedback so please r/r!
Poetry: Haiku, K, English, Poetry & Angst, words: 40, 1/27/2004
9Perfect Please R/R...I'd appreciate any criticism you could give me on this one
Poetry: Life, K+, English, words: 163, favs: 1, 1/6/2004