1Derivative of a Vengeance Dream A poem about, uhh, seduction, I guess. Thoughts?

1Impromptu a love poem that's actually true for once. true enough i guess.

2The Ego on Me rated for language. another short one. Tell me what you think. it's hard to explain...you kind of have to read it, but that's ok, because it's short.

3Dialogue this is all dialogue, and it's short so it goes really quickly. tell me if it works. thanks.

1The Train please read and review. i could use the feedback. it's about love and politics and there's explosions and everything! haha. can't tell if i'm serious or not.

1Will Manheim umm, the first two chapters of a work in progress. i don't really know what it is or where it's going, but any feedback would be helpful.

3Knowing Jim another short one. please tell me what you think.

1On Darjeeling Tea i haven't posted in a while. this is a really short story about a couple and shoveling snow and darjeeling tea. please read it and tell me what you think.

1Littler Than a Snowflake in the Sun i could use some reviews. pleaaaase. this poem can't really be explained unless you read it i guess. maybe it's about wanting to disappear. i don't know

2It's So Much Easier Not To about missing someone terribly terribly much. and it's different from any other poem about missing people so i think you should read it and tell me what you think. plus i like getting reviews...good or bad.