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Does She Write You Poetry?
I'm sure she loves you as much as any sixteen year old heart could, but does she write you poetry?Poetry: Love, K, English, Hurt/Comfort & Poetry, words: 193, 2/8/2011
4Four Letter Words
The stanzas are supposed to get bulkier at the end as sybolism for how desperation to keep someone you love in your life leads to you saying everything you can think of to make them stay. Unfortunately, this makes it seem like 2 separate poems to me. HelpPoetry: Love, K, English, Hurt/Comfort & Angst, words: 214, favs: 2, 2/2/2011
1Once
It started life as a collection of things that I wish I could say to a person I loved once and haven't since stopped. It therefore needs helpful reviews to get it to a good poetic standard.Poetry: Love, K, English, Hurt/Comfort & Angst, words: 127, favs: 1, 1/3/2011
2 Light Up
I know it's unrequited when you flick your ash at me.Poetry: Love, K+, English, words: 133, favs: 1, 4/24/2010
2 Bedrooms
I'm lying here watching you breathing. It's love that doesn't last.Poetry: Song, K, English, Hurt/Comfort & Romance, words: 235, favs: 1, follows: 1, 4/24/2010
Something to Remember You by
Grey words, they linger. You trace patterns with your finger.Poetry: Love, K+, English, Romance & Hurt/Comfort, words: 244, 4/22/2010
Gravity
Short one about the difficult relationship of two friends faced with the prospect that they are not experiencing love as the guy meets someone else.Fiction: Romance, K+, English, Hurt/Comfort, words: 649, 12/13/2009
3 In Envy
You're full of love but keep it, it's yours. I'll give it to a friend, of course.Poetry: Song, K+, English, Romance, words: 320, 10/5/2009
5 Playing with Fire
Almost bitterness about the birthday of someone I'm 'playing with fire' to be around.Poetry: Love, K+, English, Angst, words: 70, 7/20/2008
4Electronics
Electronic relationship. It's quite personal so it may come across as a bit lacking in the sense department and I didn't really structure it neatly. I'm happy with that but it still needs polishing up so suggestions are encouraged.Poetry: Song, K+, English, Romance & Angst, words: 174, 7/12/2008
8 Empty Glasses
There are hundreds of empty glass girls out there. It doesn't seem to flow very well but I think I like it like that. Suggestions?Poetry: Love, K+, English, words: 130, favs: 3, 6/30/2008
5Wonderland
The sign says 'Drink me' and I will. Need help with this one. Please read note inside.Poetry: Love, K+, Spanish, Romance & Hurt/Comfort, words: 180, favs: 1, 6/25/2008
5 Butterfly
I want to be your butterfly. About a temporary relationship.Poetry: Song, K, English, Romance, words: 269, favs: 1, 6/3/2008
2Matchbox
Strike a pose. It's a little lacking in the middle. Any suggestions?Poetry: Life, K+, English, words: 24, 1/5/2008
2 Save You
We press our bodies side by side. Can't feel a thing if we close our eyes.Poetry: Song, K+, English, Romance, words: 205, favs: 1, 1/5/2008
2 JDH
It's not particularly imaginative but I'm not sure I want it to be.Poetry: Song, K+, English, Romance, words: 172, favs: 1, 9/25/2007
7 Secrets Best Kept
It started off being about a simple friendship but I got lost in the meaning somewhere.Poetry: Friendship, K+, English, words: 73, favs: 1, 6/20/2007