HEART LOTION SPF 20 NOTICE: I've received a number of emails/PMs/reviews asking me about editing Heart Lotion, and while most of my old readers are aware of my plans, I thought it wouldn't hurt to put them on the record. As soon as I finish posting on FP, I'll be doing a complete rewrite of the story. I have been planning a major rewrite for years now. It's going to be a MASSIVE overhaul. There are so many flaws in the current version. Trust me, I am painfully aware of each and every one of them. The inconsistencies, characters, setting, style, plot holes, the list is endless. It would take me weeks to tell you about all the ways I need to change HL. But many of the major changes I can't implement right now, because they require changing the setting, killing off characters, creating new characters, revamping the mythology, cutting out entire chapters, and so forth. So, as imperfect as it is, please bear with me right now as I finish this first version.
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