PASSION IN THE DEPTHS IS CURRENTLY BEING RENOVATED. WE HAVE NOT GIVEN UP ON THE STORY, JUST THE OPPOSITE. IT WILL HOWEVER BE A WHILE BEFORE WE ARE ABLE TO START REPOSTING AND REVIEWING ETC. THANK YOU EVERYONE WHO HAS BEEN SO HELPFUL AND PATIENT WITH US

We (two cousins) write on all of the stories etc below. Some of them are rough drafts, some are not, but we appreciate feedback on all of them.

Small Biographies:

Ty's Bio:
Age: 22
Sex: F
Hobbies: Writing, singing, drama, collecting stuffed animals, playing in the rain.
Music: Dance and country.
Future Hopes: Transfer from community college to a 4-year and pursue a teaching certificate in English and Creative Writing.
Writing "Jobs": The technical portion of it all, like editing and correcting Mack's many mistakes. Dabbles in the creative side of writing and decides which story ideas have the most potential. And, of course, actually writing it.

Mack's Bio:
Age: 18
Sex: F
Hobbies: Drama, writing, swimming/boating, hanging out with friends, napping.
Music: Any and everything. (I'm listening to Riverdance right now.)
Future Hopes: Go to a "4 Year"and pursue whatever strikes my interest there.
Writing "Jobs": The creative portion of it all, like imagery and style. Coming up with story ideas and 'selling' them to Ty, plot technicalities, and of course actually writing it.

Notes:

We are both of the Christian faith so you will not see any references to "gods" or "goddesses" in our work. This does not mean that if you don't share our belief we won't review you or will give you a flame, so please give us that same courtesy. The only reason we’re mentioning this is because we’ve had some trouble with it in the past. Thanks!

We aren't sure what our next story will be. Depending on interest, we may have a second Passion in the Depths or we may move onto an entirely different genre.

Our stories are updated every Thursday with a new chapter, unless otherwise posted. So please drop by on Thursdays!

The first few chapters of Passion in the Depths are undergoing some construction. We were happy with them when they were posted, but going back and re-reading them has left us to the discovery that they aren't nearly as good as the later chapters; therefore, they're going to be (eventually) fixed. Thank all of you reviewers so much, that's the only way we were able to realize how much they needed fixing!

Stories:

1. Passion in the Depths: A war is soon to begin; a war that is so powerful, it is a fight between even the moons. Dark play and shadowed motivations make it more complicated than the average soul can see, and nearly impossible for either side to win. Huddled in the corners lay both enemies and friends - and soon the line between them grows thin as battles grow in number. While the death toll multiplies and recruits are doubled, both sides secretly seek a young slave. A slave that could, though unaware, determine the outcome of the growing onslaught. Rating is for violence.Fantasy -Action/Adveture/Romance

On Reviewing:

Constructive criticism is ALWAYS welcome here. The basic idea is that if you supply one of the stories below with an honest, actual review, we will gladly review you back. You know, return the favor. But PLEASE do not give us a review like "it was good" or "i didn't like it" just to get a review for yourself. Tell us what you did and/or didn't like about it. Thanks! If you have reviewed us and never received a review in return (giving us some time in between of course) please feel free to email us.

In regards to above, at least one of us will review you back. Almost always you will get one review from Mack and one review from Ty; however, there are rare times when only one of us will return the favor.

Thank you everyone who has reviewed us so far - you've made our day!

Important: Ty and I are very busy right now. We know our reviews to other people have been slowing down, but we promise that we have not forgotten about you. We have our personal reasons and I will not bother you with them, but please be aware that we can't be as quick to return the favor right now. If you are really worried that we have forgotten about you, send us an email and we will explain what's going on. Thank you for being so nice about our current lack of reviewing. Take care.