My Stories 25
Equine Sestina
Trying myh and at writing a sestina. R&R please!
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 304, 11/29/2007
Love and the Everyday
Lately I've been preoccupied with the words I used in the title think it has something to do with Christmas. R&R please! I'll love you forever if you do...
Poetry: General, K+, English, words: 216, 11/27/2007
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Sex
Some bad languageconcepts. Not for the kiddies. I think it's powerful, but let me know what you think. R&R please!
Poetry: General, M, English, Poetry, words: 198, 11/26/2007
The Week
A person helping another person. A oneshot, but R&R still very much appreciated!
Fiction: General, K, English, words: 536, 11/4/2007
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Return
A sonnet I wrote for a class. R&R welcome.
Poetry: Love, K, English, Romance, words: 117, favs: 1, 7/2/2007
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Opening
So this is kind of expiramental. I took song titles with girls' names in them and incorporated them into a poem. I'm not sure how well it worked, so your R&Rs are important to me. thnx
Poetry: Love, K, English, words: 400, 10/18/2006
1Psychology
Sometimes I'm amazed at the neurosis in my family. Note that this is a WIP so reviews are especially helpful! Please R&R
Poetry: Family, K, English, words: 176, 10/18/2006
1Cell Phone
This was my Short Story final, about a girl at her first "high school party." Not autobiographical, rated for drug references. R&R please!
Fiction: General, T, English, words: 1k+, 6/5/2006
2Try
How I sometimes feel with people...just read. And then make my day and review.
Poetry: Love, K, English, words: 142, 5/14/2006
1Ashes
Not sure how to describe this without making it sound awful. Kind of about the parallels I draw in my mind. R&R please.
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 227, 8/27/2005
3Blue
Oh, love unrequited is a -very- bitter thing. R&R please.
Poetry: Love, K, English, words: 120, 8/24/2005
6Ella
The innocence of childhood, sort of. R&R, please
Poetry: Life, K, English, words: 252, 6/24/2005
1Heavenless
How I feel on my worst days. R&R, please.
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 100, 6/24/2005
3Collarbone Crucifix
Hmm...kind of about my little brushes with anorexia, I guess.
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 93, 5/10/2005
6The Neverloved
Some angsty old thing I found in an old notebook...I don't really like it, but please R&R anyway
Poetry: General, K, English, Angst, words: 58, favs: 1, 3/27/2005
4When I Stand Beside You
Just a cute lil happy poem about love, maybe...I don't really know. R&R please!
Poetry: Love, K, English, words: 151, favs: 1, 3/16/2005
7Hypocritical
Ok, I'll admit it; even I don't really get this and I was the one who wrote it...possibly about addictions and all that.
Poetry: General, K, English, words: 112, favs: 2, 3/9/2005
6The Better Friend
Written for my best friend, though I never showed it to her. Reviews welcome!
Poetry: Friendship, K, English, Poetry, words: 239, favs: 3, 3/9/2005
5Try To Remember
Something I wrote for school a long time ago. Mainly about seeing someone for who they are, not for how they fit in your memory. Reviews welcome.
Poetry: Love, K, English, Poetry, words: 183, favs: 1, 3/9/2005
2Teagan and Bartholomew
A short conversation between a grown-up brother and sister, just before one of them is sent away. R&R please!
Fiction: General, K, English, words: 515, 2/25/2005