I am an aspiring professional writer (Like there's someone on this site who isn't...) and I'm publishing some of the stuff I've written recently in hopes of getting some constructive criticism on how to improve it so I can feel comfortable publishing it. What I'm focusing right now is my Winsoria series, which is a series of short stories taking place in a modern-day elf-land and focuses more on the lives of the characters and how the magic around them effects them than on any adventure or exploration. I'd really like some feedback on that. Feel free to read anything I've posted, but what I'm focusing on and would really like feedback on is Winsoria, Book One. It's probably the best thing I've posted so far, and wildly different from my other stuff.