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Alanna Lioness PM
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Joined Aug '04

Welcome!

Updated as of December 16th, 2009

So, I'm finding all this coding that is suddenly required to update my profile and edit my stories in the Doc Manager terrifying, so I'm going to keep this short. It's been a very long time since I've been on FictionPress, but I'm happy to be back and I'm looking to share my writing with the world again. During my time away, I have continued to write, although it's mostly been for myself and I haven't gotten around to showing people what I've been working on. I've participated in NaNoWriMo for three years now and the past two years' stories have been pretty bad... Haha. But, my 2009 NaNo turned out surprisingly well. If I still have any readers left from once upon a time when I used this regularly, they might remember my first, horrible draft of Fairy Lines. Well, it's back and much, MUCH better. In fact, that's the whole reason I'm here.

I have finally found the time and determination to begin a full edit of Fairy Lines. Right now I have finished a good second (it's more like a fourth, but who's counting?) draft of the first chapter and I'm working on the second chapter, which is going well. Now that I've posted the new first chapter here, I'd love to hear back from people and find out what they think. What do you think of the storyline? Are there any grammatical errors I've blatantly missed? Also I'm still not entirely happy with the title Fairy Lines, so feel free to give me any alternate title ideas. I hope to hear from you guys soon and thanks in advance!

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