My Stories 34
2Hold Your Daughters Again
Please tell me what you think. It might not be very good but I think its simple and it helped me to cope.
Poetry: Song, T, English, words: 340, 4/26/2006
1Just Wanna Dance
"the music starts and i come alive" Please R&R
Poetry: Song, K+, English, words: 318, 3/23/2006
2Broken Mirror, Slashed Image
"you couldn't convert me, so why not destroy me" Tell me what you think please! feel free to flame.
Poetry: Song, T, English, Angst & Tragedy, words: 632, 1/23/2006
4Addicted
Addicted to your toxic fumes.
Poetry: Song, T, English, Angst, words: 839, favs: 1, 9/19/2005
2What Can I Do?
Little romantic poem!
Poetry: Song, T, English, Romance, words: 1k+, 8/28/2005
4Sweet Goodbyes
"Our hearts are mourning, Our arms refusing to let go, You wipe the tears from my eyes, But they are coming too fast, And you can't stem the feeling of great loss." Little ease R&R, feel free to flame leave suggestions. Thanks
Poetry: Song, T, English, Romance & Angst, words: 585, 8/17/2005
3Release Your Grasp
"Let me run, let me dance without you watching over me, Let me feel the wind, let me taste life without you by my side." Please R&R. See note in A/N about reviewing. Feel FREE to flame. Please leave suggestions on how to improve. Thanks ;).
Poetry: Song, T, English, Angst, words: 516, 8/12/2005
3Your Words Cut Like Ice
"Your words, They cut like ice. They leave stinging welts upon my skin, I'm marred for life." Please R&R guys. Feel FREE to leave flames or any opposing opinions or suggestions on how to improve. Thanks in advance you guys!
Poetry: Song, T, English, Angst & Tragedy, words: 314, 8/10/2005
2Find Yourself
"You fly around the Earth now, Free as a bird, delicate as a butterfly, All because you found yourself." Please R&R, feel FREE to flame or leave whatever opinion that you want. Or, leave me suggestions on how I can improve! ;) I really appreciate it!
Poetry: Song, T, English, Angst, words: 388, 8/8/2005
3Dream of Shadows
"Dazzle them with your perfect smile, Tempt them with your smoldering gaze, Make them melt with pleasure." Please R&R, feel FREE to flame or leave any opinion regarding this piece, Also, I would appreciate suggestions. Thanks so much.
Poetry: Song, T, English, words: 332, 8/5/2005
4Haunted Memories
"Protective barriers shatter around me as the demonic figures, Remnants of nightmares past, Surround me." Please R&R, feel FREE to leave flames or opposing opinions. I would highly appreciate suggestions! Thanks in advance :)
Poetry: Song, T, English, Angst & Tragedy, words: 555, favs: 1, 8/3/2005
5Just Bust a Move
"Keep up with the D.J. and stay on the floor, The music will never get old, Just watch your feet burn paths of gold." Plese R&R, Feel FREE to flame or leave any opinions or suggestions,
Poetry: Song, T, English, Fantasy, words: 346, 7/22/2005
9Finally Its Over
"Tears fall from my eyes, And yours, As we hug one last time." Please R&R, Feel FREE to flame or leave any opinions of suggestions. Thanks.
Poetry: Song, K+, English, Angst, words: 269, 7/21/2005
5Lost and Found
"Darkness disappeared and light returned, And I once was lost but you found me." Please R&R and tell me what you think, feel FREE to leave flames or any opinions. Also, I would highly appreciate suggestions on how to better myself as a writer! Thanks i
Poetry: Song, K+, English, Angst, words: 562, 7/19/2005
13Dark Angel
"Foolishness overtook your senses, And you blindly turned, Towards your demise." Please R&R, feel free to flame or leave any opinions and suggestions for me. I hope you like it.
Poetry: Song, T, English, Tragedy & Horror, words: 470, 7/14/2005
12My Savior
"Thank you, For giving me the strength, To carry on, And start again, When things do not go my way." Little preview! Please R&R guys, feel FREE to flame or leave any suggestions. I don't mind differing opinions.
Poetry: Song, K, English, words: 392, 7/10/2005
10Facade
"You blame me, For my state of mind, But the sadness, Comes from a different source." Little preview! I hope you like it. Please R&R, feel free to leave flames or any other opinions/suggestions. I appreciate them all! Thanks guys.
Poetry: Song, T, English, Angst & Tragedy, words: 358, 7/9/2005
8Heartless
"I am afraid of you, For your thoughts, Reflect dark demons, That terrify me, Chilling me to the bone." Little preview! Please R&R feel FREE to flame or leave any suggestions. I really appresicate it.
Poetry: Song, T, English, Angst & Tragedy, words: 270, favs: 1, 7/5/2005
8Fool
"You burnt, Lines of pain, Into your skin, A permanent reminder, Of the terrors you, Once faced" Please R&R feel FREE to flame or share any opinion!
Poetry: Song, T, English, Angst & Tragedy, words: 261, favs: 1, 7/4/2005
8Fade Away
"To the end, Happened sooner, Than we expected." Little preview. Please R&R, feel FREE to flame or leave ANY opinion even if you don't like it!
Poetry: Song, T, English, Angst, words: 297, favs: 1, 7/2/2005