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1Caged Bird
In semiresponse to Maya Angelou's poem. I used her's for inspiration. its in Villanelle form. R&R please.Poetry: Nature, K, English, Poetry, words: 131, 3/14/2007
1Dont Blend
the basis of a villanelle i really just liked the lines. so yeah. R&R please.Poetry: Love, K, English, Poetry & Fantasy, words: 123, 3/13/2007
1Death
I have been having a bit of a morbid streak... another villanelle. R&R please.Poetry: Life, K, English, Poetry & Angst, words: 178, favs: 1, follows: 1, 3/13/2007
1Dance My Sweet Child
villanelle. my first attempt. so help please?Poetry: Life, K, English, Poetry & Angst, words: 182, 3/13/2007
3On Death and Dying
sometimes when death comes knocking, all you need is a friend to let you know things will be ok. R&R please.Poetry: Friendship, K, English, Poetry & Drama, words: 225, 3/12/2007
4Awakening
i had to write a short story in only 12 sentences. this is due on wednesday, so any help you have would be amazing. R&R please.Fiction: Mythology, K, English, Supernatural, words: 326, favs: 2, follows: 1, 3/5/2007
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Haiku Collection 2
We are learning about Haiku in Creative Writing, so here are my 8 that i completed so far. More to come? idk. R&R Please.Poetry: Haiku, K, English, Poetry, words: 99, 2/28/2007
3The Outside
when you block yourself from society, you forget what is around you, and lose touch with those you love. R&R Please.Poetry: Life, K, English, Poetry & Angst, words: 369, favs: 1, 2/28/2007
1Masquerade
a little bit of poetic constipation because i needed to keep myself writing. i was listening to Phantom of the Opera, too, so that helped in the making. R&R please.Poetry: Life, K, English, Poetry & Drama, words: 152, 2/15/2007
Rings
This was for my creative writing class. we had to find a ring that made us invisible. this is what i came up with. R&R please.Fiction: Mystery, K, English, Mystery & Fantasy, words: 1k+, 2/14/2007
2Meocentric
Dont think you are the only one with problems. R&R please.Poetry: Friendship, K, English, Poetry & Angst, words: 163, 2/3/2007
1Ah, Numbness
help with the title, second stanza and whatnot. its what happens when i feel too much and my brain doesnt want to cope with it. R&R please.Poetry: Love, K, English, Poetry & Angst, words: 232, 1/31/2007
1How it is
Yeah.. i basically fail at life. EMONESS. R&R please.Poetry: Love, K, English, Poetry & Angst, words: 110, 1/30/2007
3Soundtrack
Music. R&R pleasePoetry: Life, K, English, Poetry, words: 57, favs: 1, follows: 1, 1/30/2007
2Ode to Second Chances
Sometimes people just dont deserve a second chance. R&R please.Poetry: Love, K, English, Poetry & Romance, words: 186, 1/30/2007
4Stone Ceiling
Help with a title, please! Written for a dear friend. R&R Please.Poetry: Friendship, K, English, Poetry & Romance, words: 91, 1/29/2007
4Pond Monologue
About the same thing as the Pond poem. Still needs work, and im thinking of maybe putting this in the same play as the Mirrors monologue. but please, R&R and give me some help!Fiction: Play, T, English, Drama & Romance, words: 247, favs: 1, follows: 1, 1/21/2007
4Pond
hecka much in progress wrote it at a weird emotional high after learning of something that upset me greatly. needs much help as im currently in a slight poetic constipation. R&R pleasePoetry: Love, T, English, Poetry & Romance, words: 138, favs: 2, 1/21/2007
1Monologue of Dialogue
i need some serious help. not only with a title, but also with format, wording, and everything. R&R please.Poetry: Love, K+, English, Poetry & Romance, words: 217, 1/16/2007