Thanks to all for the reviews I love them all!!! The good, the bad, and the indifferent. So keep them coming! But I want all to know that I'm not normally the type of person to write stories, this is my first go at it. I'm more of a reader than a writer so you all need to let me know if i should keep it up. Should I?

Z'cole, just for the record, I plan on finishing my story...sometime...so dont even start about starting something and then not finishing it. Thats the pot calling the kettle black there shorty. I make a deal with you...your finish Tale of the White Moon and I will finish my story...but since I dont see you finishing that one any time soon then...