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My Happiness
What I forget to cultivate, and he doesn't. Please review.
Poetry: Love, K+, English, Poetry & Romance, words: 27, 10/12/2011
My Enthusiasm
I lose my mind to over-enthusiasm. Please review
Poetry: Love, K+, English, Poetry, words: 19, 10/12/2011
Your Poetry
For my love, who speaks sweetly. Please review
Poetry: Love, K+, English, Poetry & Romance, words: 37, 10/12/2011
Vanity
This is kind of about how my body image issues take a toll on my personal relationships. Personal stuff I'm trying to work on, feedback helps me write more, so please review!
Poetry: Life, K+, English, Poetry & Drama, words: 104, 10/12/2011
Poet
This is where I fall short as a love poet. Please review, thanks
Poetry: Love, K+, English, Poetry & Romance, words: 33, 10/12/2011
My Fear
Just a short little poem I wrote a few days ago. Please review, it would help me a lot.
Poetry: Love, K+, English, Poetry & Romance, words: 36, 10/12/2011
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Feeble
This is the way I've been feeling lately, and why I haven't been able to be satisfied. I'm sure you'll understand it, it's a pretty transparent metaphor, but PLEASE review 3 t'would help me on my mission to be more creative!Poetry: Life, K, English, Poetry & Spiritual, words: 44, 10/5/2011
1 Lost Time
Just a small love poem, trying to get myself in the swing of writing again so please review and help me out.Poetry: Love, T, English, Poetry, words: 58, 8/20/2011
Human Sacrifice: 30 Minutes or Less
This is the first in a series that I'd like to try writing about the working class. Needs some work but I'd love your opinion on it.
Poetry: Life, T, English, Poetry, words: 125, 8/20/2011
1 White Roses
About a loss which is actually a gain. Just trying to get back in the swing of writing, reviews would help immenselyPoetry: Life, T, English, Poetry & Romance, words: 44, favs: 1, 8/16/2011
11Glass Slippers »
In the process of revision so please help me out, provide some feedback for me, I really want to finish it this time around! With three teenage daughters, one of whom is struggling with the recent loss of the only father she has ever known and coping by causing trouble and setting an example for her sister, how can a widowed stepmother cope without looking like the bad guy? R&RFiction: Fantasy, T, English, Fantasy, chapters: 21, words: 15k+, favs: 3, follows: 2, updated: 8/13/2011 published: 12/30/2008
Permanence
Written for a writing prompt game but I'd like to hear some thoughts on it to help me get back into poetry please. Unpleasantness welcome.Poetry: Life, K, English, Poetry, words: 47, 8/1/2011
1Outskirts
This is about the people we love who leave us, our best friends, our lovers, to pursue new lives and opportunities.Poetry: Friendship, K, English, Poetry & Romance, words: 261, 7/17/2011
Where My Heart Is
thoughts on a big city, bright lights, wishful dreaming
Poetry: Life, K+, English, Poetry & Romance, words: 76, 6/11/2011
1The Disappearing World
Written for the prompt "invisibility". This is about two lovers who are only together because they don't see any other options. Please review and I will love you forever.Poetry: Life, K+, English, Poetry & Drama, words: 108, 6/6/2011
1A Monster's Prayer
This is the introduction to a new story I am working on, it's super super rough, but I would LOVE to hear some feedback on it, please. I have tons of work to do on it, so just please keep in mind that it's very rough.Fiction: Fantasy, T, English, Fantasy, words: 2k+, follows: 1, 6/3/2011
Indifference in the Rain
It's rained for pretty much a week and a half straight here now, and I'm quite frankly sick of all the people wishing for sunshine. T for language, just cause I wanted to convey some annoyance.Poetry: Life, T, English, Poetry, words: 22, 4/27/2011
Lost Souls
When sinners die, they are welcomed into a heaven where there's a night club on every corner and God takes the form of a hipster teenage girl who joins them all in partaking in heaven's more earthly pleasures. Please review, got lots more to add and fixFiction: Fantasy, M, English, Fantasy, words: 519, 4/5/2011
1 Cry Your Name
This is about anticipation of gauging someone's reactionPoetry: Life, K, English, Poetry, words: 67, 3/27/2011
1 Stupid Questions
a poem about a proposal. Please review :Poetry: Love, K+, English, Poetry & Romance, words: 64, 3/16/2011