Location: Somewhere up North.
Gender: Your call.
As much as I would like to dispense my own advice on writing, I find that I just don't have the time to sit around writing reviews. However, I have found a website that addresses 99.9 of the problems I find with FictionPress stories, including my own. If all FP authors followed this advice, I could spend my time giving actual constructive critique instead of repeating the same basic suggestions:
Stories needing constructive criticism: MISERICORD: A Dark Superhero Story. This is in its first draft and will be heavily edited, with entire plot elements being moved and large sections cut out or modified. Your reviews will be the most valuable before the editing period.
Check out my Animagess account for old pieces.
Check out my homepage for my unofficial novelization of Donnie Darko.
Check out this link for some old anime drawing tutorials: http:///howtodraw/animagess/1-style.html