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dblack50 PM
Joined Jan '07

I've been writing for over 20 years, but I just decided to step out and share my stories. I'm hoping for feedback so I can improve my writing, although I have yet to decide what I'll do beyond that. I am a Christian, and while my stories might not seem to be Christian stories, it is something I strive to change and improve on.

My first story, "Sins of the Father", is something I've been working on for several years. It's the story of a man returning to his father's home after a long absence. While the circumstances surrounding his estrangement from his father are revealed early on, his flashbacks paint a larger picture of his struggles to avoid repeating the same mistakes his father made. This story means a lot to me, and there are many themes of this story that were inspired by my own life, even though it is completely fictional. Feedback is welcome because it can only improve the story. The story will be going through some major editing as some point, so your suggestions and comments are extremely valuable.

I posted "Her Brother's Keeper" because I really love this story even though it has yet to go beyond that one chapter. I have started writing more, but I'm not sure if that will be posted after "Sins of the Father" or not. I do hope to add to it later, but I'm still unsure where it goes from here.

Emily C. - I'd love to hear what else you have to say about "Sins of the Father" if you want to share. I wouldn't mind having a conversation about the Christian aspect of the story either. Hope to hear from you again. Thank you for your feedback. I really appreciate it. :-)

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