Sekine Hana PM
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Like Poetic Hearts
For lack of a better title. Read and review. I want a critique of my poem. Haven't had reviews in ages. It's a carthartic poem for me. Just an expression of my personal writing process. Unedited. Maybe you could help with that :
Poetry: General, K+, English, words: 173, 9/28/2009
Effervescent Love
Like chemistry anew.
Poetry: Love, T, English, Romance, words: 264, 9/16/2009
As I Think of Mankind
The sin of man, and my despair; no faith, for I now see the deceit in our eyes.
Poetry: General, K+, English, words: 135, 8/18/2009
He'd hold your tears instead
Written in reflection by the beach, a poem about something beautiful beyond the grief that lets us press forward and wipe the tears away.
Poetry: Religion, K+, English, Spiritual & Tragedy, words: 252, 6/15/2009
1Sister
She was my sister, my only best friend. Just a short thing I wrote. I will expand it to a full story, but I can't find the inspiration. Comments highly appreciated because I intend to submit this story as part of my writing portfolio :
Fiction: General, K+, English, Family, words: 242, 6/8/2009
Crossing Death
Don't cry, for I'm going on a frightening venture to the unknown.
Poetry: Life, K+, English, words: 139, 6/7/2009
1Battle of Light and Darkness
As an omen hangs overhead, a kingdom is thrown into turmoil, and swords are drawn as battles are fought and blood spilt. Ancient magic reawakens, secrets are revealed and men are betrayed. Will there be an end to this battle of light and darkness?
Fiction: Fantasy, T, English, Fantasy, words: 2k+, 12/7/2008
1 Rememberance
Even at your deathbed, I could love you not...
Poetry: General, K+, English, words: 170, 12/5/2008
The Mundane Things of Life »
Don't let the title turn you away. Sometimes the little things brings pleasant surprises. A series of short descriptive pieces about everyday life. Read introduction for more.
Fiction: General, K, English, chapters: 3, words: 1k+, 11/23/2008
24 Of Love and Death »
A sorrowful girl, strong, yet weak, her hands stained by the blood of those she had slain. She believed in what she was doing, yet, a part of her seemed to scream for her to stop living the life that she was... and will she ever learn to love again?
Fiction: Fantasy, T, English, Fantasy & Romance, chapters: 10, words: 30k+, favs: 2, follows: 7, updated: 11/13/2008 published: 3/12/2008
3 Ink
The ink, the words, the paper - my heart
Poetry: General, K+, English, Poetry, words: 173, 10/5/2008
2 A glimpse of heaven
deluded. You shouldn't have believed hell was heaven.
Poetry: Life, K+, English, Poetry, words: 145, favs: 1, 8/25/2008
3 Piano Disaster
For some, it is not easy. You have the love for it, but not the talent. And when you walk into that examination room, it is a piano disaster. This story might be feel like s strikingly similar experience for those who take ABRSM piano exams.
Fiction: General, K+, English, words: 1k+, favs: 1, 7/28/2008
2 Different
the punishment of being different...
Poetry: Life, K+, English, Poetry & Angst, words: 98, 7/20/2008
5 Invisible Figure
everyone looks through her, like she doesn't exist at all...
Poetry: Life, K+, English, Angst, words: 112, 7/20/2008
1 Waiting for Love
She waits, it never comes...
Poetry: Love, K+, English, Poetry & Angst, words: 93, favs: 1, 7/17/2008
1 Last Love
Life can never be as beautiful as it should have been...
Poetry: Life, K+, English, Poetry & Angst, words: 138, favs: 1, 7/7/2008
2 Influenza 56 »
The battle of a doctor and a virus which has claimed the lives of his many patients, and now him. One-shot with epilogue.
Fiction: General, K+, English, Tragedy, chapters: 2, words: 3k+, favs: 1, 7/4/2008
3 Romeo and Juliet: woes and plot, all in a page
Just a reflection of Romeo and Juliet after reading it. Written in Iambic Pentametre and a funny mixture of modern and Shakespearean English. Mostly to make fun of Romeo, whom I think is a really irritating character and the blame for the whole tragedy.
Poetry: Humor, K, English, Parody & Humor, words: 341, 6/30/2008
2 The sea, the stars, and a lonely, wandering heart
She stares out at the sea, her heart devoid of love and hope, lonely. She searches for any possible comfort in her hurt. Will she find the love that she longs for? Short story, mostly descriptive, themed around love healing hurt.
Fiction: Romance, K+, English, Romance & Hurt/Comfort, words: 1k+, favs: 1, 5/31/2008