2 Daylight A blind painter sees again, but not all is what he reckoned it would be. A short story I wrote for school. It's not perfect but a read and review would be amazing. I got a 98 on it if that helps encourage anyone.
Fiction: General, T, English, Tragedy & Drama, words: 1k+, favs: 2, 8/21/2009
3Nocturnes » As the name suggests, poems about the night, based on the musical nocturne. A variety of styles and themes with certain motifs and similarities between them. Some are better than others, and most are sad, but I still would like you to read them. Thank you
Poetry: Love, T, English, Hurt/Comfort, chapters: 10, words: 2k+, updated: 8/21/2009 published: 11/1/2008
3 I think I like her Short, humorous, probably relatable. About love, but taken in a frivolous manner.
Poetry: Love, K, English, Humor & Poetry, words: 196, favs: 2, 8/20/2009
1 Just War A slam poem I wrote about war's futility and unfortunate occurrence.
Poetry: War, T, English, Poetry & Tragedy, words: 415, favs: 1, 5/28/2009
1 To Tell the Truth Ambivalence in the realm of love.
Poetry: Love, K, English, Poetry & Romance, words: 198, favs: 1, 5/20/2009
1 A sonnet Title says it all: a questioning sonnet that I never sent. It's short, and a review would be much appreciated. Thank you.
Poetry: Love, K, English, Poetry, words: 107, favs: 1, 5/19/2009
For Restful Death I Cry A brief one act play that won a contest I submitted it to. Unrequited love leads a young man to a desperate choice. A read and review would be awesome. Thank you.
Fiction: Play, T, English, Drama & Supernatural, words: 2k+, favs: 1, 5/19/2009
1Nail Biter A somewhat humorous, somewhat trite, extremely short tale of an unlikely romance. It's rather light.
Fiction: Romance, K+, English, Hurt/Comfort & Romance, words: 590, 2/18/2009
4 Trite Tragedy A disillusioned youth's thoughts about his family and his life in the evening hours. A narrative poem that is free verse and grim, but any review negative, positive, long, or short would be nice. Thanks.
Poetry: Family, T, English, Angst & Family, words: 182, favs: 2, 1/2/2009
3 A Shipwreck Originally about a painting Vernet's Shipwreck , which depicts a struggling set of sailors crawling on a rocky coast after a wreck. In the distance is a glorious sunset and set of ships. Basically the poem tries to capture the feeling and sounds of it.
Poetry: Nature, K+, English, Poetry, words: 329, favs: 1, 1/2/2009
3 Christmas Eve 2030 A somewhat humorous, lighthearted poem about an old man reminiscing over an old Christmas to his bewildered grandson. I wrote it relatively quickly so it is not too good, but, like I said, it is quite light.
Poetry: Family, K, English, Humor & Family, words: 344, favs: 2, 1/2/2009
1 The Wedding Bell A villanelle about a bell, showing how emotions skew the way we perceive things. Somewhat short, mostly sad. Review if you wish, I'd be quite happy.
Poetry: Life, T, English, Poetry & Angst, words: 129, 12/12/2008
1 Poland is my Heart's Home I am barely a little Polish, yet that piece of me, as small as it is, is deeply treasured in my heart. This is a short poem about that unlikely but powerful patriotism, that longing for Poland, that love and loss I feel for it. Please review. Thank you.
Poetry: Life, K, English, Poetry, words: 278, 11/29/2008
1 Rhinoceros A sound poem exploring the running of a rhino within the whispering greens of a moonlit jungle until... Please review if you can. Thank you.
Poetry: Nature, T, English, Tragedy & Poetry, words: 326, favs: 1, 11/7/2008
1 Expression A poem about trying to express those emotions that are too powerful for words and simple structure, breaking rules of syntax or classical dance to try to do it. An experiment in line breaks. Please review if you wish. Thank you.
Poetry: Life, T, English, Poetry & Angst, words: 202, 11/7/2008
Opus 28: Escape A sound poem about trying to escape the realities of life by playing the piano, hoping the music can take you away from arguments and regrets.
Poetry: Life, T, English, Poetry & Angst, words: 351, favs: 1, 11/1/2008
Sonnet 3 A sorrowful, reflective sonnet. "O why does love so often dwell in verse?"
Poetry: Love, K+, English, Hurt/Comfort & Poetry, words: 119, 9/30/2008
13Dear Reverend » My fist "mystery," a series of fragments and letters about a certain case. They're short, but there are many characters. I apologize for this, but I hope that it does not detract.
Fiction: Horror, T, English, Crime & Horror, chapters: 9, words: 3k+, favs: 1, follows: 2, updated: 9/25/2008 published: 8/27/2008
1Perceptions A somewhat humorous, rhyme-less poem about various perceptions about the same person, ranging from shoes, to eyes, to hearts. I experimented with fonts to designate the speaker. Hope you enjoy!
Poetry: Love, K+, English, Humor & Poetry, words: 166, 9/16/2008
3 It Haunts me Doctor A surrealistic parable-like story about a patient relating a dream to a therapist with a rather surprising answer. Not very long, and reviews, no matter how short, would be nice.
Fiction: Fantasy, T, English, Angst & Tragedy, words: 589, favs: 1, 9/6/2008