Scholar's Mate Then, a knock at the door. And that's/the problem with doors. As long as they/ exist, people will bang on them. I don't like to summarize poetry. Take from it whatever you will. Critiques always encouraged!
Poetry: Life, T, English, Tragedy, words: 181, 2/17/2012
Silver Lining, More Than Skin Deep Here's to your soul exuding/power and it's simplistic overlooked beauty.
Poetry: General, K+, English, Friendship & Hurt/Comfort, words: 317, 6/17/2011
Blame Game I heard Phillip Larkin's "Be the Verse" and it inspired this semi-satirical piece. Better, I think when read aloud, but I'll let you be the judge. Please review! rated T for language. I drop the F bomb... a few times.
Poetry: Humor, T, English, Poetry & Humor, words: 133, favs: 1, 2/18/2011
3 High School An "I am" poem I wrote for a college class. Please review...
Poetry: Life, T, English, Hurt/Comfort, words: 94, 2/17/2011
4 Just Write A poem about writing poetry... or maybe it's about something more?
Poetry: Love, T, English, Poetry & Romance, words: 93, favs: 2, 11/4/2010
2 Tombé revision of an earlier work Nocturne . Please review constructively. "Deliver her from our father/ Now, before it's the hour of her death"
Poetry: General, T, English, Hurt/Comfort & Tragedy, words: 133, 10/31/2010
3 Lines Broken Workshop poem - task: Begin or end your personal poem with a line from a famous poem. I took a line from Frank Finale's Terrorist Poem and both opened, and closed my own poem with it. Please, Please review.
Poetry: General, T, English, Hurt/Comfort & Horror, words: 66, favs: 1, 10/21/2010
1 Relapse A poem for school - the assignment was "write about a moment when all five of your senses were stimulated." I may have stretched the topic slightly. You tell me please.
Poetry: General, T, English, Hurt/Comfort, words: 126, 9/14/2010
1 A study in contrasts tongues outstretched/ to catch a glimpse of / perfection R&R please, its for class, I need to know if it sucks...
Poetry: General, K+, English, Tragedy, words: 36, 2/3/2010
1 Better the flash of silver that will draw crimson." self injury.
Poetry: General, T, English, Hurt/Comfort, words: 72, 10/5/2009