Suddenly Lauren PM
Mothers and Their Sons
Poem about relationships. I'm in a creative writing class and I'm looking for advice on my writing before I turn in my portfolio. Any review would be much appreciated!Poetry: Life, T, English, Romance, words: 97, 2/27/2010
Night
Poem about drug addiction. I'm in a creative writing class and would like some feedback on my poems before I submit them in my portfolio. Thanks for any help!Poetry: Life, M, English, Tragedy, words: 103, 2/27/2010
Death in a Hospital
Poem about death. I'm in a creative writing class and I would like some input on my poems before I submit my portfolio. Thanks in advance for any advice!Poetry: Life, M, English, Tragedy, words: 244, 2/27/2010
The Vogue
Poem about a little theater I frequent. I'm in a creative writing class and would like some feedback on my poems before I submit my portfolio. Thanks in advance for any help!
Poetry: Life, T, English, words: 88, 2/27/2010
Babysitting
Poem about babysitting. I'm in a creative writing class and would like any input before submitting my portfolio! Thanks!Poetry: Life, K, English, Humor, words: 99, 2/27/2010
1 Trouble
Prequel to my story Permanent, but can be read on its own. One-shot on of the night Carson and Alayna meet. Alayna is the new girl, and Carson is excited for some fresh meat. But who will get who in the end? I appreciate any and all reviews!Fiction: Romance, T, English, Humor, words: 4k+, favs: 1, 7/13/2009
4 Permanent
Alayna and Carson have been fighting the odds for almost seven years. Will they be able to fight harder after an unexpected pregnancy and some heart ache? One-shot. Rated M for mature themes and some language. Please, Please, Please Review!Fiction: Romance, M, English, Romance, words: 3k+, favs: 18, 6/17/2009
9 Maybe
One-shot written for Ridiculously Happy One-shot contest by annoyance. Candace is in love with the perfect guy, Ben. Problem? He has no idea. Oh, and his mother hates her. Perfect. VOTING NOW UP ON ANNOYANCE'S PROFILE!Fiction: Romance, T, English, Romance & Humor, words: 3k+, favs: 34, follows: 3, 4/28/2009
1 Not You
Poem about feelings of inadequacy. Reviews are nice.Poetry: Life, T, English, words: 36, 4/28/2009
Heavy
Poem about the weight of a relationship. Reviews are nice.Poetry: Life, T, English, words: 67, 4/28/2009
More or Less
Random poem I wrote for a class. My friends thought I should post it on here with my other stuff. First poem post.Poetry: Love, T, English, Poetry, words: 172, 4/27/2009
2 Winning
A one shot depicting a couple that have been friends since childhood and are finally taking the plunge. Originally written for a novel, but it didn't fit in the end. I want to see if it would be worth a retry. Reviews are love : T for language.Fiction: Romance, T, English, Romance & Friendship, words: 1k+, favs: 4, 4/3/2009