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Without You
One of my first attempts at adhering to a set rhyme pattern...please read and review. Constructive criticism is welcome!
Poetry: Life, K+, English, Poetry, words: 358, 6/4/2013
Arms Outstretched
My first attempt at prose poetry
Poetry: Life, K+, English, Poetry, words: 169, 6/4/2013
1Liberation
Please read and review, constructive criticism is welcomePoetry: Life, K+, English, Poetry, words: 111, favs: 1, 6/4/2013
I See You
Another new poem of mine.. I'd like to dedicate it to my Babushka, one of the residents at the nursing home I work at who suffers from Alzheimer's disease but still manages to brighten my day.Poetry: Life, K+, English, words: 147, 5/23/2013
1 Anchors
I haven't posted any poetry on here for a few years, and I am happy to be getting back to it...This is my first attempt at a poem in a while so please don't hesitate to give constructive criticism!Poetry: Life, K+, English, words: 57, 5/23/2013
Baby Bites
Are my emotions all my own? Is what i touched really what i felt? Your toughest opponent is yourself, and by taking away what you need, you weaken your enemy.Poetry: Life, K+, English, Poetry & Angst, words: 197, 10/14/2009
1Bite Me
about hating someone, i mean really hating someone. i may have to edit to really capture the enmity but tell me what you think R&R pleassePoetry: Life, K+, English, Angst & Hurt/Comfort, words: 245, favs: 1, 8/29/2009
1 Lighting Fires As I Go
you play with fire, you're going to get burned, wish i knew that then" maybe i fall to fast, but im not slow to react : R&RPoetry: Love, K+, English, Poetry & Hurt/Comfort, words: 196, 8/25/2009
2 Waiting
short,nt sure about the title but please R&R!: is life really worth the fight?Poetry: Life, K+, English, Poetry & Hurt/Comfort, words: 100, 8/22/2009
Almost There
an old poem, not my best. sometimes turning things around isn't as easy as it seems R&RPoetry: Life, K+, English, Poetry & Hurt/Comfort, words: 182, 8/22/2009
1Burnt By The Moon
My first story on fp. about a romani teenager xgypsyx hope u like it, reviews keep me writing! a better summary awaits so please read and tell me what u thinkFiction: Young Adult, K+, English, Romance & Mystery, words: 777, 8/22/2009
2 Bow and Arrow
a love poem,despite what i've seen, i still believe true love exists and that scares the heck out of me lol crazy rite? please R&R!Poetry: Love, K+, English, Romance & Fantasy, words: 245, favs: 3, 8/21/2009
1 I'm Gone
my parents and i never had a great relationship lol written during a phase of teen angst and sorta based on a true story please R&RPoetry: Life, K+, English, Poetry & Hurt/Comfort, words: 216, favs: 1, 8/21/2009
1 My Happily Ever After
sum guys jst aren't worth the tears. written after an unexpected, and my first, break-up. please R&RPoetry: Love, K, English, Romance & Hurt/Comfort, words: 236, favs: 2, 8/21/2009
1 You Incandescence
formerly known as cupcake, baby, honeybuns if u think of a better name tell me lol R&RPoetry: Love, K, English, Poetry & Romance, words: 184, 8/18/2009
2 Quiet Desperation
This is a new one i wrote in my free time. i'm a little out of my comfort zone without the rhyming tho lol R&RPoetry: Life, K, English, Poetry & Angst, words: 209, favs: 1, 8/17/2009
3 Once the Light is Gone
Another poem i wrote for the literary mag. at school : R&RPoetry: Nature, K, English, words: 184, favs: 1, 8/17/2009