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monarchos PM
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Joined May '12

As always, I appreciate any and all constructive feedback, no matter how harsh. In particular, I could use some pointers on where my story seems to lose tension.

I have lived all over the United States, and currently live in Florida. I've been trying to write (unsuccessfully) for awhile. I was able to complete a lengthy fan fiction story with the little bit of motivation provided by a few stalwart individuals there.

I'm also trying to write some original full length stories in both young adult and mature categories. I'm hoping to receive enough feedback here to keep me properly motivated and to improve. Please leave constructive and detailed feedback. If you are interested, I will be glad to return all reviews.

My fanfic is based on the movie Let Me In under the name "Realbullet". It's written for mature readers -- thanks for reading.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6630491/1/Traversing_the_Needles_Eye

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