First of all, I don't write or post poetry anymore. Sorry to disappoint you, but what you see is what you get. I'm done.
Secondly, what you do see here was written between 1998 and 2001, when I was in 8-10th grade. Sure, it may not be great, but what do you expect from someone that young?
Third, since it was written so long ago, and I was young (and still in school), there are going to be mistakes and stuff in these poems. You know what, I really don't care. So don't tell me to change stuff because it "doesn't flow" or whatever. I DON'T CARE. And I'm too lazy to go back and change it even if I did care.