Green Monster When jealousy consumes you and there's nothing you can do about it. -Had to write a poem with onomatopoeia, metaphor and symbolism. Any review would be nice

2 Heaven Couldn't Wait For Her I've never really let myself drown in the sadness of the death of my mom. I guess this story is very much out of character. I am not used to overthink what happens in my life. And I thought that writing and maybe giving other people comfort through this might bring everything back in balance. I'm okay with bad reviews or no readers, just need to get rid of this feeling.